kamala Harris 2 D Acrostic
Kamala Harris Vrs Trump 2 d acrostic2 total reviews
Comment from SimianSavant
Hi, your acrostic reads "KAMAKA". As in, kamikaze? Not sure I understand what you are going for.
Anyway, this contest is a two dimensional acrostic contest, meaning your acrostic has to work horizontally as well. The first letter of each word is fixed. Please read the rules and the examples. You can make whatever political point you want and I will review it fairly (there's actually another piece in this contest crapping on Trump that did a great job, and I gave it a 6) but if your piece gets DQd before the booth, most folks will never get to see your entry.
If you amend your piece to meet the format of the contest, please let me know so I can re-review and give you back a star or two.
Regards,
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reply by the author on 08-Sep-2024
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Hi, your acrostic reads "KAMAKA". As in, kamikaze? Not sure I understand what you are going for.
Anyway, this contest is a two dimensional acrostic contest, meaning your acrostic has to work horizontally as well. The first letter of each word is fixed. Please read the rules and the examples. You can make whatever political point you want and I will review it fairly (there's actually another piece in this contest crapping on Trump that did a great job, and I gave it a 6) but if your piece gets DQd before the booth, most folks will never get to see your entry.
If you amend your piece to meet the format of the contest, please let me know so I can re-review and give you back a star or two.
Regards,
🦍
Comment Written 31-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 08-Sep-2024
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disqualified oh well it was fun to try
Comment from Julie Helms
This is supposed to be a 2-d acrostic, which means you spell the word down and across in each line like in the examples. Going down you have KAMAKA. And you don't have any of the lines going across. Still time to revise!
Julie
reply by the author on 08-Sep-2024
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This is supposed to be a 2-d acrostic, which means you spell the word down and across in each line like in the examples. Going down you have KAMAKA. And you don't have any of the lines going across. Still time to revise!
Julie
Comment Written 31-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 08-Sep-2024
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missed the deadline sadly