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Amorous game-playing: a Sonnet.

Two young lovers flirt, tease and dissemble.

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Comment from Michael Ludwinder
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Your poem shows affection with such charm! The playful tension is shared so well. You show the hard to get game so well. This was interesting and so well written with perfect word choices. Fantastic job!

 Comment Written 31-Aug-2024


reply by the author on 31-Aug-2024
    Many thanks.
Comment from Katiemae1977
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Well done and a sonnet to boot! Very impressive.
An excellent entry for the contest. It fits the prompt title perfectly.
Best wishes with this well-penned poem!

 Comment Written 31-Aug-2024


reply by the author on 31-Aug-2024
    So kind. Many thanks.