Love At First Touch
a nonet3 total reviews
Comment from RodG
Ah, the memories this brings back. Your Nonet describes young love very well. You put us there in that room with this couple when her touch makes. him tingle. Your allusion to Columbus being "in a new world" is very appropriate. Rod
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Ah, the memories this brings back. Your Nonet describes young love very well. You put us there in that room with this couple when her touch makes. him tingle. Your allusion to Columbus being "in a new world" is very appropriate. Rod
Comment Written 31-Aug-2024
Comment from Patty Mazzurco
Your formatting is great! I really enjoyed this! The way you describe the touch of her hand creating a jolt and making your heart ... prance down Main Street ... is so vivid and exciting. The idea of feeling like Columbus discovering a new world full of love is a great metaphor, though some might argue lol
It captures that thrilling feeling of being in love and makes it feel magical. The ending, with the focus on ... Love ... ties everything together perfectly. This was great--I really liked it!
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Your formatting is great! I really enjoyed this! The way you describe the touch of her hand creating a jolt and making your heart ... prance down Main Street ... is so vivid and exciting. The idea of feeling like Columbus discovering a new world full of love is a great metaphor, though some might argue lol
It captures that thrilling feeling of being in love and makes it feel magical. The ending, with the focus on ... Love ... ties everything together perfectly. This was great--I really liked it!
Comment Written 31-Aug-2024
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
I thought your poem beautifully captured the power of love. The way the lines gradually shorten adds to your poem. It makes it feel like there is this intense moment at the end. It's an uplifting poem that made me feel the joy and discovery of falling in love.
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I thought your poem beautifully captured the power of love. The way the lines gradually shorten adds to your poem. It makes it feel like there is this intense moment at the end. It's an uplifting poem that made me feel the joy and discovery of falling in love.
Comment Written 31-Aug-2024