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2024 Japanese Poetry

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Comment from barbara.wilkey
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Yes, all of those experiences with a child are creating lasting memories. That's always a good thing. Thank you for sharing this poetic experience with us. I enjoyed reading.

 Comment Written 30-Aug-2024


reply by the author on 30-Aug-2024
    Thank you very much. May you have a wonderful weekend.

    Gypsy 😊
Comment from Jacob1395
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This is a beautiful piece of writing and your visual imagery, as always, is really strong. I thought it was really well written, engaging and I really enjoyed reading it.

 Comment Written 30-Aug-2024


reply by the author on 30-Aug-2024
    Thank you very much for the excellent review. Have a wonderful weekend.

    Gypsy 😊
Comment from Rachelle Allen
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Then they will be the wealthiest children anywhere. I love this beautiful poem which pulls at the heartstrings of anyone with sensibilities. Love the colors you chose, and the artwork is absolutely gorgeous, as always. xoxox

 Comment Written 29-Aug-2024


reply by the author on 30-Aug-2024
    Thank you very much for the excellent review. Have a wonderful weekend.

    Gypsy 😊
reply by Rachelle Allen on 30-Aug-2024
    You, as well, Sweet Gypsy! Xo
Comment from shelley kaye
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oooh this was a very calming feel to it...
i like the two poems of what you share and what you'll leave behind is opposite yet the same
excellent imagery in both and a smooth flow throughout

thank you for sharing
shelley :)






 Comment Written 29-Aug-2024


reply by the author on 30-Aug-2024
    Thank you very much for the exceptional six stars review. Have a wonderful weekend.

    Gypsy 😊
Comment from GWHARGIS
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A good parent leaves a flood of warm memories. We leave a legacy of love and hearts full of happiness. Too often people want to leave only money. But getting money that way, by losing someone who is important, is the most hollow inheritance. I think about my parents and the love and principals they instilled in me and I am thankful. I love that you used the seasons as the legacy. Beautifully written. Gretchen

 Comment Written 29-Aug-2024


reply by the author on 30-Aug-2024
    Thank you very much for the excellent review. Have a wonderful weekend.

    Gypsy 😊
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
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A beautiful reflection of what you enjoy so much now and what will be left behind as your legacy. I enjoyed the way you included every season and the gifts they provide. Thanks for sharing. Debbie

 Comment Written 29-Aug-2024


reply by the author on 30-Aug-2024
    Thank you very much for the excellent review. Have a wonderful weekend.

    Gypsy 😊
Comment from Mrs. KT
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Simply beautiful, Gypsy!
And I would have to share that your legacy is mine as well.
How fortunate are we to be able to give our children such beautiful gifts.
Treasures, indeed.

Thank you for sharing!
fondly,
diane

 Comment Written 29-Aug-2024


reply by the author on 30-Aug-2024
    Thank you very much for the excellent review. Have a wonderful weekend.

    Gypsy 😊
Comment from patcelaw
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Very nicely written and was a pleasure to listen to your presentation is always beautiful and I enjoy it always. May you have a wonderful weekend and may God bless you. Patricia.

 Comment Written 29-Aug-2024


reply by the author on 30-Aug-2024
    Thank you very much for the excellent review. Have a wonderful weekend.

    Gypsy 😊
Comment from RJ Heritage
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Beautiful and thoughtful words that are very much centered on life. Funny how one of our greatest lagacies to leave our children is the times that we shared with them, goid memories.
RJ

 Comment Written 29-Aug-2024


reply by the author on 30-Aug-2024
    Thank you very much for the excellent review. Have a wonderful weekend.

    Gypsy 😊
reply by RJ Heritage on 30-Aug-2024
    My pleasure. Enjoy your weekend
    RJ
Comment from lyenochka
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That's beautiful, MariVal. We're at an age when we consider what we leave to our children. You'll leave a legacy of beautiful memories of lots of love and beautiful poetry!

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 Comment Written 29-Aug-2024


reply by the author on 30-Aug-2024
    Thank you very much, Big Sister

    Gypsy 😊 ❤️