Sandra's Lover
Viewing comments for Chapter 38 "Introducing Lieutenant Leven"A macabre crime thriller. Grotesque and detailed.
2 total reviews
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
I thought this was well written. Lieutenant Leven's approach to the case and the gradual reveal of clues works so well. I was very much drawn into the story. The attention to detail is excellent. I though that especially true with Leven's transition from boredom to excitement. Excellent job!
reply by the author on 03-Sep-2024
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I thought this was well written. Lieutenant Leven's approach to the case and the gradual reveal of clues works so well. I was very much drawn into the story. The attention to detail is excellent. I though that especially true with Leven's transition from boredom to excitement. Excellent job!
Comment Written 31-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 03-Sep-2024
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Thank you so much for your review! I appreciate your feedback!
Comment from Pamusart
Hi, Eileen
So the plot thickens. Poor kid's not going to get his poacher money
But, he might be getting an even bigger reward if it's the serial killer
I wonder if they'll find the kid that's in the back of the car is a victim of the serial killer. But it sure sounds like the guy is not Mark.
Here an hour
"so I didn't think too much about it and for 12 bucks and hour I ain't "
I enjoyed reading your book chapter
Good job. Thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 03-Sep-2024
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Hi, Eileen
So the plot thickens. Poor kid's not going to get his poacher money
But, he might be getting an even bigger reward if it's the serial killer
I wonder if they'll find the kid that's in the back of the car is a victim of the serial killer. But it sure sounds like the guy is not Mark.
Here an hour
"so I didn't think too much about it and for 12 bucks and hour I ain't "
I enjoyed reading your book chapter
Good job. Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 31-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 03-Sep-2024
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Thanks again Pam! you're a gem!
