Spirited Justice
Viewing comments for Chapter 17 "Spirited Justice Chap 17"Mystery, crime and ghostly high jinks
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Comment from Carol Clark2
It sounds like Jose is in over his head, and Angelo is not far behind. I'm wondering what you have planned for Carlos to do. Or perhaps Carlos is responsible for Jose's current condition. Good chapter! Lots of intrigue. Eleanor to the rescue again. Blessings. Carol
reply by the author on 01-Sep-2024
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It sounds like Jose is in over his head, and Angelo is not far behind. I'm wondering what you have planned for Carlos to do. Or perhaps Carlos is responsible for Jose's current condition. Good chapter! Lots of intrigue. Eleanor to the rescue again. Blessings. Carol
Comment Written 31-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 01-Sep-2024
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things are popping everywhere. thank heavens for Eleanor to safe those who should be saved. Thank you as always.
Smiles, Carol
Comment from karenina
So. I'm not so crazy about anybody helping Carlos at this point. Papa Bear is determined, though, and with a plate number and a lot of "muscle," I'm thinking he'll be found. I need a program to check off all the characters and make notes as to whom I dislike the most.
Thank goodness the good guys (and good ghosts) are easy to spot!
Karenina
reply by the author on 31-Aug-2024
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So. I'm not so crazy about anybody helping Carlos at this point. Papa Bear is determined, though, and with a plate number and a lot of "muscle," I'm thinking he'll be found. I need a program to check off all the characters and make notes as to whom I dislike the most.
Thank goodness the good guys (and good ghosts) are easy to spot!
Karenina
Comment Written 31-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 31-Aug-2024
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You're down to the wire now...I am waiting to see what you think of my next chapter... it's crazy! Thanks again for expending all your energy on my story...you are the best! Love ya! that goes without saying!
Smiles, Carol
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I hate to get behind. But it's a real rush to get to read through like this...
Made my day!
Comment from Ric Myworld
Well, for Jose's and Angelo's sake, I hope the Calvary is coming quick enough to thwart what's coming next. The Calvary, who am I kidding, his dad better act faster than that. :-) Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 31-Aug-2024
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Well, for Jose's and Angelo's sake, I hope the Calvary is coming quick enough to thwart what's coming next. The Calvary, who am I kidding, his dad better act faster than that. :-) Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 31-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 31-Aug-2024
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Wait tilll you read Chapter 18...My mind might have gone crazy with the action...but I hope it stills sounds believable...things are happening! Sad part is...Jose doesn't deserve the help! But his dad is his dad! Smiles to you, Carol
Comment from Carol Hillebrenner
Angelo certainly does have his problems. He is in love with Naomi but afraid she will die, and she might if he doesn't trust Elizabeth. He also needs to keep Jose alive, but he is now in the hands of professionals.
reply by the author on 30-Aug-2024
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Angelo certainly does have his problems. He is in love with Naomi but afraid she will die, and she might if he doesn't trust Elizabeth. He also needs to keep Jose alive, but he is now in the hands of professionals.
Comment Written 29-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 30-Aug-2024
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Yes, Angelo is caught between being a good person and recognizing that he's been walking a thin line...now he has to discover how to get out of it and stay alive. He's in a mess! But I am sure Eleanor will help him outX!
Smiles, Carol
Comment from royowen
So Angelo has been sucked in by a distress call from Jose, who is losing a bucket of blood, but when gets there there are two, what looked like professionals carting him away, he tells Carlos, Jose's father, he will handle it, feel sorry for the guys, well done Carol. Blessings Roy
reply by the author on 29-Aug-2024
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So Angelo has been sucked in by a distress call from Jose, who is losing a bucket of blood, but when gets there there are two, what looked like professionals carting him away, he tells Carlos, Jose's father, he will handle it, feel sorry for the guys, well done Carol. Blessings Roy
Comment Written 29-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 29-Aug-2024
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Yes, Angelo is getting drug into something he doesn't want to be in...especially since he'd rather see Jose eliminated after what he believes he did to Naomi. Like a game of tug of war.
Smiles, Carol
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I agree
Comment from Jacob1395
I love how you're upping the tension with each chapter and especially surrounding Eleanor as well. It really feels as though there is no safe place she can go and she desperately needs help. A well written piece Carol with engaging dialogue. I really enjoyed reading it.
reply by the author on 29-Aug-2024
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I love how you're upping the tension with each chapter and especially surrounding Eleanor as well. It really feels as though there is no safe place she can go and she desperately needs help. A well written piece Carol with engaging dialogue. I really enjoyed reading it.
Comment Written 29-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 29-Aug-2024
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Thanks so much for the review, Jacob. Appreciate your comments.
Smiles, Carol
Comment from Wendy G
Whew! What a chapter. Six worthy, but I am sorry to have no more. Everything is now urgent. Naomi, Hilda, Thomas, and José. Garth and Eleanor, and also Donatelli, will have their work cut out! And Angelo caught in the middle. Well written.
Wendy
reply by the author on 29-Aug-2024
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Whew! What a chapter. Six worthy, but I am sorry to have no more. Everything is now urgent. Naomi, Hilda, Thomas, and José. Garth and Eleanor, and also Donatelli, will have their work cut out! And Angelo caught in the middle. Well written.
Wendy
Comment Written 29-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 29-Aug-2024
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The tension is building and things ar happening everywhere. When Matthew discovers Garth is involved, we might have a real explosion. LOL thanks so much, Wendy.
Smiles, Carol
Comment from lyenochka
Ah, you're pulling in help from yet another of your books! I remember the very private hospital. And what a good thing for Angelo to remember - that one can't believe what's on the surface as he himself hangs out with the wrong crowd. Hope they can rescue Jose - he might be able to reform.
By the way, life is getting too busy so I will be reviewing less.
reply by the author on 29-Aug-2024
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Ah, you're pulling in help from yet another of your books! I remember the very private hospital. And what a good thing for Angelo to remember - that one can't believe what's on the surface as he himself hangs out with the wrong crowd. Hope they can rescue Jose - he might be able to reform.
By the way, life is getting too busy so I will be reviewing less.
Comment Written 29-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 29-Aug-2024
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I think Angelo has a chance of becoming a good guy again...that is if he doesn't let Carlos or Jose get him. Thanks so much for the review. I understand about being buys...just stop by when you can.
Smiles, Carol
Comment from LJbutterfly
Every one of your chapters deserves six stars. I love, love, love all the elements of this story. It keeps my imagination and mind totally engaged as I watch you weave all the characters and scenes together. A key example is...You brought Frank DiVito back, just in time to save Naomi. I feel like I'm watching a movie. In other words, I'm enjoying your efforts.
reply by the author on 28-Aug-2024
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Every one of your chapters deserves six stars. I love, love, love all the elements of this story. It keeps my imagination and mind totally engaged as I watch you weave all the characters and scenes together. A key example is...You brought Frank DiVito back, just in time to save Naomi. I feel like I'm watching a movie. In other words, I'm enjoying your efforts.
Comment Written 28-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 28-Aug-2024
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I'm so glad you remembered him and his hospital. That's what I hope for when people read the stories. I want them to feel like they know the person...some good some bad. You'll have to put your thinking hat on and find some ideas for another story. Haven't finished this one and my minds already racing ahead. LOL Thanks again for enjoying my efforts and awarding the story six stars. Awesome!
Smiles, Carol
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
Oh dear! I'm not sure Jose will get out of this one. He has messed up big time. will Carlos be able to get to him in time? And then we have Naomi, she has to make it. Eleanor has a lot of problems she has to sort out. I'm hanging, jaw dropped, and waiting for the next chapter!! No pressure, but hurry it up! Lol. Love and hugs, my dear friend. :) Sandra xxx
reply by the author on 28-Aug-2024
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Oh dear! I'm not sure Jose will get out of this one. He has messed up big time. will Carlos be able to get to him in time? And then we have Naomi, she has to make it. Eleanor has a lot of problems she has to sort out. I'm hanging, jaw dropped, and waiting for the next chapter!! No pressure, but hurry it up! Lol. Love and hugs, my dear friend. :) Sandra xxx
Comment Written 28-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 28-Aug-2024
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I've got to get Danni and Donatelli busy too...and of course Garth and Matthew will have to butt heads before things start happening. There's just so much to do...LOL Naomi will be well taken care of by our Gangster friend....and that's good because I think Angelo is going to be busy. I don't know which way to go first..... Start craqcking that whip!
smiles and hugs and all my love, Carol
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Goodness me!!! That is a lot for you to sort through. No wonder you can't sleep. You must live and breathe your characters. You'll do it, though, I have every confidence in you. 😂🥰xxx
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At times I find myself already wondering what antics Eleanor and the group can get involved in when I write another book. LOl Any suggestions or requests?
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I'll put my thinking cap on! 😂🥰💕
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I'll look forward to it!