Comment from Teri7

Excellent

This is a very beautiful and very well written 5-7-5 nature haiku suite you have penned for the contest. You used great descriptive words and very lovely imagery. Best wishes in the contest. Teri

 Comment Written 29-Aug-2024

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reply by the author on 29-Aug-2024

Thank you so much, Teri. I appreciate your kind words and best wishes.

Comment from RodG

Excellent

You capture the essence of each season very well in this haiku suite. Your refrain clearly conveys your message.
Nice use of enjambment in each stanza as your words smoothly flow from line to line. Rod

 Comment Written 27-Aug-2024

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reply by the author on 27-Aug-2024

Thank you, Rod. I appreciate your kind and encouraging comments.

Comment from Patty Mazzurco

Excellent

This haiku captures the essence of seasonal change beautifully. The imagery of "Summer's last sizzle" being replaced by "Fall's cool breeze" sets a vivid scene of transition, while "God takes His paintbrush" introduces a divine touch to the natural beauty of autumn. The final stanza, with the "strong North wind" and "a blanket of white," evokes the arrival of winter in a clear and striking way.

 Comment Written 27-Aug-2024

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reply by the author on 27-Aug-2024

Thank you, Patty. I appreciate your thorough review and insightful comments.