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Comment from Bill Schott
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This senryu suite, I Feel Your Touch, has the person meeting with the gentle and firm hands of nature whenever the possibility presented itself for that communion.

 Comment Written 29-Aug-2024


reply by the author on 30-Aug-2024
    Thank you very much for the excellent review. Have a wonderful weekend.

    Gypsy 😊
Comment from Ulla
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Oh, Marival, this is so sensual and beautifully written. It brought me back to days when this actually happened to me. What a joy that you brought back those sensual moments. Un abrazo y besitos, Ulla xxx

 Comment Written 29-Aug-2024


reply by the author on 30-Aug-2024
    Thank you very much for the exceptional six stars review, Ulla. Have a wonderful weekend.

    besitos y abrazos 😊❤️

    MariVal
Comment from patcelaw
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This is very well written in age for listening to it very much. I am sorry I'm a bit late on reviewing this, but I have had a very bad summer cold and when I do my reviews, I have to speak them in because of my vision and when I speak, it causes me to cough so I can only do a couple pieces at a time. Patricia

 Comment Written 28-Aug-2024


reply by the author on 28-Aug-2024
    I'm sorry, Patricia, it must be hard I appreciate your review.

    Gypsy 😊
    Gypsy
Comment from barbara.wilkey
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Thank you for sharing this very sensual poem with us. You are so wonderful at choosing the exact words to cause your readers to feel emotion. That's God given talent.

 Comment Written 27-Aug-2024


reply by the author on 27-Aug-2024
    Thank you very much, Barbara

    Gypsy 😊
Comment from Begin Again
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Your words and the picture move as if it is someone who has lost her love to death, but still yearns for his touch. she finds it in the breeze and in the sky and feels it in her soul. So moving!
Smiles, Carol

 Comment Written 27-Aug-2024


reply by the author on 27-Aug-2024
    Thank you very much, Carol

    Gypsy 😊
Comment from RJ Heritage
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The desire to be desired is a very strong human feeling that we all share.
Well written and presented poem with good imagery.
Thank you for sharing.
RJ

 Comment Written 27-Aug-2024


reply by the author on 27-Aug-2024
    Thank you very much, RJ

    Gypsy 😊
reply by RJ Heritage on 27-Aug-2024
    You're welcome
    RJ
Comment from Jacob1395
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I love how you conjure up so many images in your writing and it really makes it an immersive experience as I reading your poem. Another excellent piece, I really enjoyed reading it.

 Comment Written 27-Aug-2024


reply by the author on 27-Aug-2024
    Thank you very much, Jacob

    Gypsy 😊
Comment from EeanBlack
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WOW! Part of me wants to read this poem again, and again, and again. When I lived in San Diego, I felt this way every time I felt a warm breeze. It seemed to permeate my soul, lifting it. There is something greater. Go share it. Be intimate with it. This is a very beautiful poem.

 Comment Written 27-Aug-2024


reply by the author on 27-Aug-2024
    Thank you very much, Eeanblack

    Gypsy 😊
Comment from lyenochka
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You used such sensual descriptions of the narrator's recollection of how her beloved's touch is still remembered by the natural things like the wind and the sea.

 Comment Written 27-Aug-2024


reply by the author on 27-Aug-2024
    Thank you very much, Big Sister. How are you? Taking time for yourself?

    Love😊
    MariVal
reply by lyenochka on 28-Aug-2024
    Been busy with the grandkids yesterday. We took them shopping for school things - clothes, shoes, and just caught up with them to see how their first day was. Our oldest is a high schooler now! 💖
reply by the author on 28-Aug-2024
    High-schooler.... grandchildren grow so quick. My girls are 23 and 24! My grandson started early... my first grand daughter was born on 2000... she is a dragon. I'm happy you get to see them.
Comment from royowen
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A beautifully written post Gypsy, sensitive in all the right, the very words and music of love that speaks of the sheer beauty of touch, the nerves in our body, are meant to bring both pleasure and pain, as our emotions do the same. Beautifully written, blessings Roy

 Comment Written 26-Aug-2024


reply by the author on 27-Aug-2024
    Thank you very much, Roy

    Gypsy 😊
reply by royowen on 27-Aug-2024
    Welcome Gypsy,