Comment from Katiemae1977

Excellent

This is an absolutely lovely haiku suite. It is a more modern form of haiku.
"Chaos dances on the waves" brilliant
"Blue waves kiss the shore" fabulous
Best wishes in the contest with this awesome entry

Heads up for next time and I hope you write more haiku.
Haiku does not use Capitol letters. I probably should have mentioned that but it's a minor technically.

 Comment Written 29-Aug-2024

Comment from zanya

Excellent

I t's a great title especially the reference to 'whispers' and an interesting reflection on the many and varied aspects of the ocean and how it is such a vital aspect of the earth's eco system.

 Comment Written 27-Aug-2024

Comment from lancellot

Excellent

This is very good. This was not an easy contest, and having the three haiku interrelated should have been a challenge but you've made it look simple.
The overall ocean theme lends itself well to a haiku.

Well done.

 Comment Written 26-Aug-2024

Comment from Bill Schott

Excellent

This 5-7-5 suite, Ocean Whispers, has the proper formatting and presents the relationships the body has with all the other elements above its mighty flood.

 Comment Written 26-Aug-2024