At The Mexican Restaurant
A contest entry3 total reviews
Comment from Rachelle Allen
HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA. (I just realized this: do I start every one of my reviews for your work like this??) You are absolutely hilarious, and this has Winner's Circle written all over it! You absolutely slay me. Yes, losing friends in lieu of a FS deadline is a sound trade-off, indeed!! xoxox
reply by the author on 26-Aug-2024
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HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA. (I just realized this: do I start every one of my reviews for your work like this??) You are absolutely hilarious, and this has Winner's Circle written all over it! You absolutely slay me. Yes, losing friends in lieu of a FS deadline is a sound trade-off, indeed!! xoxox
Comment Written 26-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 26-Aug-2024
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Lol. They were lousy friends anyhow. Haha. Thank you for the great review, Rachelle. I'm glad you had a chuckle at this silliness. I love writing ridiculous crap on here. Lol.
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And you have mastered the genre!
Comment from lancellot
Well, that was an unexpected flash ending. I had wondered what the rush was really for. But, to have your main character break the fourth wall and be another FanStory addict was a funny moment. I'm sure this will catch the voters too.
Good work.
reply by the author on 26-Aug-2024
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Well, that was an unexpected flash ending. I had wondered what the rush was really for. But, to have your main character break the fourth wall and be another FanStory addict was a funny moment. I'm sure this will catch the voters too.
Good work.
Comment Written 25-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 26-Aug-2024
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Thank you for the great review, Lance. I appreciate the stars, friend. I'm glad you liked this silly piece.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
This is hilarious and just loved the humour here, glad you made it in time to enter the contest by shovelling that food down quickly and telling your friends to do the same! You are right about phones, they appear at the dinner table and disrupt conversations. I laughed throughout this post and for that reason, it has to be a six from me, love Dolly x x x
reply by the author on 26-Aug-2024
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This is hilarious and just loved the humour here, glad you made it in time to enter the contest by shovelling that food down quickly and telling your friends to do the same! You are right about phones, they appear at the dinner table and disrupt conversations. I laughed throughout this post and for that reason, it has to be a six from me, love Dolly x x x
Comment Written 25-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 26-Aug-2024
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Hey, Dolly, hello. Thank you so much for the fantastic review and giant sixer. Yes, there's a lot less talking when people are out to eat anymore. I dearly appreciate the stop in and generous rating, Dolly. I'm glad you had a chuckle at this silliness. Thank you again.