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Comment from lyenochka
Man, Joe! Wake up, Guy - shouldn't you call the police or something and find out what happened to your wife? Lol. This is a very succinct dialogue. Best wishes in the contest!
reply by the author on 26-Aug-2024
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Man, Joe! Wake up, Guy - shouldn't you call the police or something and find out what happened to your wife? Lol. This is a very succinct dialogue. Best wishes in the contest!
Comment Written 26-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 26-Aug-2024
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Thanks Helen.
Comment from BOO ghost
This is humorous! His main concern is the powdered milk which tastes like yuk! Who is the mystery man in this picture? Oh, FanArtReview. You might have to make a run to the supermarket. You might be waiting for a long time or never! Bud. May be good riddance, Lol! Maybe try 'Door Dash' for special deliveries! Enjoy your cereal!
BOO!
reply by the author on 26-Aug-2024
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This is humorous! His main concern is the powdered milk which tastes like yuk! Who is the mystery man in this picture? Oh, FanArtReview. You might have to make a run to the supermarket. You might be waiting for a long time or never! Bud. May be good riddance, Lol! Maybe try 'Door Dash' for special deliveries! Enjoy your cereal!
BOO!
Comment Written 25-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 26-Aug-2024
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Ha ha. Great review. Thanks
Comment from jessizero
This short piece of dialogue for the contest was very entertaining! I loved your ending; it was unexpected. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
reply by the author on 25-Aug-2024
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This short piece of dialogue for the contest was very entertaining! I loved your ending; it was unexpected. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
Comment Written 25-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 25-Aug-2024
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Thanks. So glad you like it. Jen.
Comment from Ric Myworld
Sometimes, it only takes few words to tell a complete and complex story. And you've certainly painted us a total history of Joe and Jean's relationship and life. :-) Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 25-Aug-2024
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Sometimes, it only takes few words to tell a complete and complex story. And you've certainly painted us a total history of Joe and Jean's relationship and life. :-) Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 25-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 25-Aug-2024
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Thanks so much Ric for the revue and stars. Jen. X
Comment from lancellot
Ha, a good idea for flash fiction. The humor of the short post was well delivered, and this was written with no extra words. Right down to the point, with a surprise and funny ending. Great work
reply by the author on 25-Aug-2024
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Ha, a good idea for flash fiction. The humor of the short post was well delivered, and this was written with no extra words. Right down to the point, with a surprise and funny ending. Great work
Comment Written 25-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 25-Aug-2024
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Thank you
Comment from PENofFIRE
Oh, that is a good one. Heartless, but good. Love the picture you chose for your little conversation. I must have a sick sense of humor because I thought it was funny. Good luck with the contest.
reply by the author on 25-Aug-2024
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Oh, that is a good one. Heartless, but good. Love the picture you chose for your little conversation. I must have a sick sense of humor because I thought it was funny. Good luck with the contest.
Comment Written 25-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 25-Aug-2024
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Thanks glad you liked it. Jen