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Forty-fifth

a poem

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Comment from Father Flaps
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Hi Bill,
He's tossing his name aside and renaming his businesses "45". How many votes will that bring in? He's got to stop spending time in court, and get back to campaigning. And I don't mean accusing Harris or Walz of this or that. Trump needs to tackle the country's issues, and what he's going to do about them if he's elected. But it's not his style. He's going to dirty the pool where Harris and Walz take their morning dip. We'll see pretty soon... the Man or the Myth? If he does become the next President of the United States, he might be the first president to be sentenced to time in a prison! How will that look to the rest of the world?
"Half the country sees him a saint." ... and that's the truth. Also the problem. Last time the vote was so close, Republican supporters stormed Congress. Personally, I think there could be another Civil War in the United States if Trump is beaten by a narrow margin. The only thing that will save the country is if he's beaten so bad... he'll have to crawl away.
I enjoyed your poem, Bill. I'm a Canadian, but truly interested in the coming election in your country. It will affect us, too.
Cheers,
Kimbob

 Comment Written 06-Sep-2024


reply by the author on 06-Sep-2024
    If the election is close, it will send to the Supreme Court. Gee, I wonder what they will decide?
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
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Hahaha I love the picture and your poem's message. I pray every night four our country' to unify but that's unlikely. I think harris and walz have a good shot, maybe not to change maga folks' minds but to defend our democracy and the constitution of the united states of America.

Trump is losing his mind watching Harry's polls better than his. He doesn't make any sense. He is a clown and a felon. I see him losing the presidency and be forgotten.... complaining to a hand full of marolago guests.

Anyway.... excellent poem and commentary . Well done.

 Comment Written 27-Aug-2024


reply by the author on 27-Aug-2024
    Thank you, Gypsy.
Comment from Mark D. R.
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Bill,

My hope that half the country by Electoral vote counting will not say he is anything close to being a saint (or a good candidate). His vaccine rhetoric or position was not Presidential IMHO.

Many of us believe he is the sinner and certainly not thinner LOL

Mark

 Comment Written 25-Aug-2024


reply by the author on 25-Aug-2024
    Thanks, Mark
Comment from jim vecchio
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Batman or Harvey Dent? Which is the hero we need, and the one we deserve? Which is the candidate we need, or the one we deserve? We'll find out soon. A good short political statement.

 Comment Written 25-Aug-2024


reply by the author on 25-Aug-2024
    Berney Sanders.
reply by jim vecchio on 25-Aug-2024
    I'd even take Colonel Sanders.
Comment from Pam (respa)
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-Good artwork and presentation, Bill.
-You wrote a good poem with
effective imagery and rhyme.
-A very good second line with
a good reason why you "can't see the man."
-A good job with the closing lines, as well.
-Thanks for sharing it.
-I hope your wife is doing better and
things settle down for you and your family.

 Comment Written 25-Aug-2024


reply by the author on 25-Aug-2024
    Thank you, Pam. We are tending her surgery site now along wiyth some accelerated asthma.
reply by Pam (respa) on 25-Aug-2024
    You are welcome, Bill and thanks for the update. Many thoughts are with you and hope she is better soon.
Comment from Begin Again
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As a young girl, I was taught to stand tall for our country, to be proud of our flag, and to treat others as we wish to be treated as well. Somewhere, somehow, all of that has been lost...Have we become so blind that we find it okay for our nation's capitol to be attacked, for someone to be convicted of criminal activity but be supported as president, for bold lies to be accepted as the new truth? Anyone who supports Putin and boldly says that we will never have to vote again if he claims the office....that's a new government for America and one I don't want to see. I try to steer away from politics because everyone is entitled to their opinion, but I guess you put a little "spirit" in my morning coffee. Well done!

 Comment Written 25-Aug-2024


reply by the author on 25-Aug-2024
    The problem has always been the Congress. Any dumb president can poop all over, but the Congress has to allow it. Trump has enjoyed the Senate helping him deny a progressive Supreme Court Justice replacement by Obama, but okay three conservative appointments by Trump, leading to the 6-3. Now the court has ended federal abortion and allowed Trump to never be prosecuted.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
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I don't think Trump is a saint, but I do believe he will do the country a lot of good and he is a strong leader. There have been too many years of floundering with a puppet in charge, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 24-Aug-2024


reply by the author on 25-Aug-2024
    I guess you have to be here to feel the weight of his presidency on the moral fiber of the nation. He seems to want power like Putin, who can never lose an election, and Jinping, President for Life of China.
Comment from Gloria ....
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This is hilarious and I love it. From the artwork right through to the last word.

He may not be a saint, but he's just the kind of flawed man God would use, don't cha know?

Many thanks for sharing. :)

Gloria

 Comment Written 24-Aug-2024


reply by the author on 25-Aug-2024
    Thank you, Gloria.
Comment from nomi338
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A convicted felon is nobody's saint.34 felony convictions and this guy wants to be president. I mean never even mind the felony convictions, consider all the things he has done that he never had to face the music in court for.

 Comment Written 24-Aug-2024


reply by the author on 25-Aug-2024
    I do not like Trump.
Comment from Wendy G
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He's definitely no saint. I hope your country will be able to see him for who he really is. There are too many lies altogether about how wonderful he is. Clever poem. Best wishes.
Wendy

 Comment Written 24-Aug-2024


reply by the author on 25-Aug-2024
    I started out rigid, but pulled back a bit when a Trumpette told me to F-off. This approach covers the current feelings in the Republican Party, that Trump is a flawed genius who is God's to-be-converted warrior.