2024 Gypsy's Haiku
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Comment from barbara.wilkey
Butterflies are so beautiful and graceful. When I'm able to just sit back and watch them, they give me peace. So did your poem. Thank you for sharing this entire presentation with us.
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2024
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Butterflies are so beautiful and graceful. When I'm able to just sit back and watch them, they give me peace. So did your poem. Thank you for sharing this entire presentation with us.
Comment Written 23-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2024
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words. Happy weekend.
Gypsy 😊
Comment from RJ Heritage
Sometimes the seemingly small and insigificant things that we do in life, could have dire consequences. This again demonstrates how we are all connected in this universe. Your beautiful verses brings this to light very well
RJ
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2024
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Sometimes the seemingly small and insigificant things that we do in life, could have dire consequences. This again demonstrates how we are all connected in this universe. Your beautiful verses brings this to light very well
RJ
Comment Written 23-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2024
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words. Happy weekend.
Gypsy 😊
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My pleasure
RJ
Comment from lyenochka
I like how you contrast the gentle butterfly flutters and its soft landing on the petals of the flowers with the raging wind that can uproot mighty oaks. You're right that either of these can have real consequences that change history!
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2024
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I like how you contrast the gentle butterfly flutters and its soft landing on the petals of the flowers with the raging wind that can uproot mighty oaks. You're right that either of these can have real consequences that change history!
Comment Written 23-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2024
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words. Happy weekend.
Love 😊
Marival
Comment from Teri7
Gypsy, This is a very beautiful and very well written haiku. You used great descriptive words and really amazing imagery and colors. I really enjoyed reading and reviewing this. love and blessings, Teri
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2024
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Gypsy, This is a very beautiful and very well written haiku. You used great descriptive words and really amazing imagery and colors. I really enjoyed reading and reviewing this. love and blessings, Teri
Comment Written 22-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2024
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words. Happy weekend.
Gypsy 😊
Comment from shelley kaye
i love butterflies...
this was a great butterfly effect haiku
nice imagery of the raging winds and smooth flow
thank you for sharing!
shelley :)
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reply by the author on 23-Aug-2024
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i love butterflies...
this was a great butterfly effect haiku
nice imagery of the raging winds and smooth flow
thank you for sharing!
shelley :)
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Comment Written 22-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2024
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words. Happy weekend.
Gypsy 😊