Another Wild Night
Youth getting wild.64 total reviews
Comment from Lindsey Russell
I've not seen very many poems geared toward the young adult audience. This one is very good. I love that it rhymes as well. Thanks for sharing and happy writing!!!!
reply by the author on 20-Sep-2024
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I've not seen very many poems geared toward the young adult audience. This one is very good. I love that it rhymes as well. Thanks for sharing and happy writing!!!!
Comment Written 19-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 20-Sep-2024
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Thank you so much Lindsey. I really appreciate that!
Comment from davisr (Rhonda)
Hi Harry,
A little different poem for you, but I like it. You get into the heads of young adults wanting to have a fun time. It's cute, it's fun and I'm sure many young adults can relate to it.
Take care,
Rhonda
reply by the author on 20-Sep-2024
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Hi Harry,
A little different poem for you, but I like it. You get into the heads of young adults wanting to have a fun time. It's cute, it's fun and I'm sure many young adults can relate to it.
Take care,
Rhonda
Comment Written 19-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 20-Sep-2024
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Well, thank you Rhonda. I really appreciate your review!
Comment from patcelaw
How many of those young people who got wild on a Saturday night live to regretted it on Sunday morning when they found out that they had done some awful things. Patricia.
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2024
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How many of those young people who got wild on a Saturday night live to regretted it on Sunday morning when they found out that they had done some awful things. Patricia.
Comment Written 13-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2024
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Lol! Well, Patricia I am sure we have all been there once in our life. Thank you so much for your review. I really appreciate it!
Comment from Jansella
This poem is fun and I almost want to sing it when I read it. It flows nicely. It's like the joy of being young, happy, and free spirited. When older people read this it will bring back memories of the joy of youth.
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2024
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This poem is fun and I almost want to sing it when I read it. It flows nicely. It's like the joy of being young, happy, and free spirited. When older people read this it will bring back memories of the joy of youth.
Comment Written 13-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2024
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Well, thank you Jansella. I really appreciate that!
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You're welcome Harry Craft.
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Roger that!
Comment from Karen Cherry Threadgill
Honey bunch. The poetry is uneven in stanza length. Also, The rhyming pattern keeps changing. In order to establish flow, you must allow us to read a rhythm. Edit and I will come back and give a 5. Karen
reply by the author on 05-Sep-2024
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Honey bunch. The poetry is uneven in stanza length. Also, The rhyming pattern keeps changing. In order to establish flow, you must allow us to read a rhythm. Edit and I will come back and give a 5. Karen
Comment Written 05-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 05-Sep-2024
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Well, sweetie. I am not trying to win a Pulitzer lol!
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Pulitzer is for prose. Boy. you just let your self wide open for stuff. When i first came on here I cried I was edited so much, but, I put on my big girl pants and kept at it. you will get better believe me, Karen
Comment from karenina
Wow... I can hardly remember those wild and crazy weekends when we all thought life was for partying and we'd live forever with a song and a smile and (if we were lucky) a flirtation that flipped life on its head for a bit.
The days are long past. Thanks for the (distant) memories!
Karenina
reply by the author on 05-Sep-2024
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Wow... I can hardly remember those wild and crazy weekends when we all thought life was for partying and we'd live forever with a song and a smile and (if we were lucky) a flirtation that flipped life on its head for a bit.
The days are long past. Thanks for the (distant) memories!
Karenina
Comment Written 04-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 05-Sep-2024
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Yes, Karenina. I think we have all been there. Thank you so much for your review. I really appreaciate that!
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Shhh. I'm old enough to have attended Woodstock. (And I did)--- For ALL kinds of reasons I don't remember half of that...but It's a badge of honor, now to my kids and grandkids!
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Oh, I wish I could have attended Woodstock. That must have been great!
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I was fifteen and totally lying to my parents about where I was heading...
But it was SO worth it!
:)
Comment from Katherine M. (k-11)
Well, I'm glad I grew out of those Saturday nights, they were so superficial. You captured them well in your clever poem - good rhymes and flow bring the memories back to the reader whether he likes them or not. kay
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2024
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Well, I'm glad I grew out of those Saturday nights, they were so superficial. You captured them well in your clever poem - good rhymes and flow bring the memories back to the reader whether he likes them or not. kay
Comment Written 04-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2024
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LOL! Yes, Katherine, I think we have all been there. Thank you for your review. I really appreciate that!
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
Your poem captures a carefree Saturday night so well! I love how you've created that lively atmosphere. The poem flows smoothly. I enjoyed the playful interactions with the waitress. So realistic! haha The way you end it is perfect. Great work!
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2024
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Your poem captures a carefree Saturday night so well! I love how you've created that lively atmosphere. The poem flows smoothly. I enjoyed the playful interactions with the waitress. So realistic! haha The way you end it is perfect. Great work!
Comment Written 03-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2024
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Well, thank you Michael for your kind words and I appreciate your review!
Comment from Neonewman
Oh, the days of youth! I remember them fondly, my friend. What great and some not-so-great memories this piece has brought forth. Thank you for sharing, my friend.
God bless,
Steve
reply by the author on 31-Aug-2024
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Oh, the days of youth! I remember them fondly, my friend. What great and some not-so-great memories this piece has brought forth. Thank you for sharing, my friend.
God bless,
Steve
Comment Written 31-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 31-Aug-2024
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LOL! Yes, well thank you Steve. I really appreciate your review!
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My pleasure.
Comment from Katiemae1977
Well done Harry. Nice rhymes and a wonderful flow makes this poem a smooth and easy read.
Oh to be young again and be able to go out and have fun like that.
Take care!
Katherine
reply by the author on 30-Aug-2024
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Well done Harry. Nice rhymes and a wonderful flow makes this poem a smooth and easy read.
Oh to be young again and be able to go out and have fun like that.
Take care!
Katherine
Comment Written 30-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 30-Aug-2024
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Yes, Katherine. We have all been there. Thank you so much for your review. I really appreciate that!