Nature's Masterpiece
Etheree of Blue5 total reviews
Comment from BermyBye50
This is a excellent entry in the Color Series poem contest. You've crafted an excellent poem with 1-2-3-4-5-6-7-8-9-10 syllables describing the various shades of blue occurring in nature.
One suggestion:
Revise the last line as 'Nature's masterpiece under cloudless skies' to make it 10 syllables
All the best in the contest
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This is a excellent entry in the Color Series poem contest. You've crafted an excellent poem with 1-2-3-4-5-6-7-8-9-10 syllables describing the various shades of blue occurring in nature.
One suggestion:
Revise the last line as 'Nature's masterpiece under cloudless skies' to make it 10 syllables
All the best in the contest
Comment Written 23-Aug-2024
Comment from bonespur
This seems like a good candidate for the contest. The structure seems good and the subject matter is interesting. Good job and good luck. Have a blessed day
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This seems like a good candidate for the contest. The structure seems good and the subject matter is interesting. Good job and good luck. Have a blessed day
Comment Written 23-Aug-2024
Comment from TPAC
The mirage on the sea Oceanic speaks show shades of blue
Bringing an aura of peace
Capturing the sunlight
Spreaded the ripples wide grow blue
Nature's masterpiece under a cloudless sky
Mixed with each other to merge as one.
Just another perceptions, of those selected ingredients inspiring this read.
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The mirage on the sea Oceanic speaks show shades of blue
Bringing an aura of peace
Capturing the sunlight
Spreaded the ripples wide grow blue
Nature's masterpiece under a cloudless sky
Mixed with each other to merge as one.
Just another perceptions, of those selected ingredients inspiring this read.
Comment Written 22-Aug-2024
Comment from Wendy G
A beautiful presentation, and your Nonet is well done, an excellent entry for the contest. Your last line is particularly beautiful, especially when paired with that well-chosen image. Best wishes for the contest.
Wendy
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A beautiful presentation, and your Nonet is well done, an excellent entry for the contest. Your last line is particularly beautiful, especially when paired with that well-chosen image. Best wishes for the contest.
Wendy
Comment Written 22-Aug-2024
Comment from jessizero
I loved the way you wrote this "blue" poem as an etheree. You picked several pieces of blue to express, and it paid off. The picture you supplied is great, as well. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
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I loved the way you wrote this "blue" poem as an etheree. You picked several pieces of blue to express, and it paid off. The picture you supplied is great, as well. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
Comment Written 21-Aug-2024