Comment from Pamusart

Excellent

Hi Eileen

It sounds like maybe Mark is a serial killer. And maybe some behind some of the doors are trophies

He has a lot of appointments with women that his receptionist doesn't seem to keep track of. Very suspicious

I hope she got those papers in the same order because he's going to be very suspiciousif she didn't. And she'd be about the only one that could get into his desk and files.

I'm excited for the next few chapters

Here. worked hard at

"Perfect. See you soon." Aliss worked hard a keeping her tone "

I enjoyed reading your book chapter

Good job. Thank you for sharing.

 Comment Written 20-Aug-2024

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reply by the author on 21-Aug-2024

Thank you for your review., More chapters coming.

Comment from patcelaw

Excellent

This is a very well written chapter in your book. It was a pleasure to listen to as it flows very well when it is read aloud your sentence structuring your paragraphing are wonderful and your punctuation is excellent. I wish you the very best with all of your writing and I also wish you a very good week. Patricia

 Comment Written 20-Aug-2024

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reply by the author on 20-Aug-2024

Thank you Patricia....more to follow