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Gulls dance in the sky.3 total reviews
Comment from Aiona
I don't know what it's called, but I think this nature haiku fits the prompt because the last line is very... I can't remember what it's called. It fits the 5-7-5 requirement. And it's about nature. What is that last line called?
reply by the author on 20-Aug-2024
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I don't know what it's called, but I think this nature haiku fits the prompt because the last line is very... I can't remember what it's called. It fits the 5-7-5 requirement. And it's about nature. What is that last line called?
Comment Written 19-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 20-Aug-2024
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Thank you for the read and review. I must admit, I don't know what the last line is called.
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Someone told me in a review of one of my haikus! It's "satori." An awakening. The last line is a summary of the image painted by the first two lines. :)
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Now that you provided the term, I think I remember it as being a summation of the first two lines. Thanks for the information. Appreciated.
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
This haiku is simply beautiful! The imagery of gulls as "God's ballerinas" is so beautiful. You've captured the grace and elegance of their flight perfectly. The words flow effortlessly. I really enjoyed how you shared such a beautiful scene with so few words. It's truly a lovely piece!
reply by the author on 20-Aug-2024
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This haiku is simply beautiful! The imagery of gulls as "God's ballerinas" is so beautiful. You've captured the grace and elegance of their flight perfectly. The words flow effortlessly. I really enjoyed how you shared such a beautiful scene with so few words. It's truly a lovely piece!
Comment Written 19-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 20-Aug-2024
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Thank you for the read and encouraging review. So please you enjoy the poem.
Comment from Pamusart
Hi
This looks like a good entry for the contest. Good luck with that!!
What a masterful wonderful haiku you have written here
Your Satori line is just perfect
Thinking of birds as ballerinas that is brilliant
I'm giving you six stars for this one
I enjoyed reading your poem
Good job. Thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 19-Aug-2024
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Hi
This looks like a good entry for the contest. Good luck with that!!
What a masterful wonderful haiku you have written here
Your Satori line is just perfect
Thinking of birds as ballerinas that is brilliant
I'm giving you six stars for this one
I enjoyed reading your poem
Good job. Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 19-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 19-Aug-2024
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Wow! Thanks so much for the review and six star honor. Sincerely appreciated.