Apprise
Follow the golden mean.2 total reviews
Comment from Pamusart
Hi
I'm just riding to you to let you know that your font is extremely extremely difficult to read. Your background. Color is too similar to your text if I enlarge it to a huge degree, I might have a chance to read it but even then it's difficult to read. Do you ever do a preview when you post something? Do you ever look at it after you made your changes to post it?
If I were you, I'd go back and figure it out
reply by the author on 17-Aug-2024
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Hi
I'm just riding to you to let you know that your font is extremely extremely difficult to read. Your background. Color is too similar to your text if I enlarge it to a huge degree, I might have a chance to read it but even then it's difficult to read. Do you ever do a preview when you post something? Do you ever look at it after you made your changes to post it?
If I were you, I'd go back and figure it out
Comment Written 16-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 17-Aug-2024
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I did not ask for what you saw. It came by its own accord. Why this time and not other times, I do not know. I loved it and it was crisp and clear and beautiful to me. Do you and I see the same thing? I do not know. How to make sense of this? I do not know. I am sorry.
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It's just that I can't see it because the text and font are the same color on my screen
Comment from SimianSavant
This meets the syllable count requirements which you obviously already knew. I suggest a slightly lighter shade of grey, to improve readability. If your intent is to convey that someone is headed down a dark path, you can always add some text shadowing. I can read this just fine, but some others might not.
It tempts? <= though workable, this feels slightly clunky to me. Some other two syllable alternatives:
-Evil path? Tempted?
-The evil path tempts
-some paths lead astray
-dark paths start well-lit
Thanks for the read,
🦍
reply by the author on 16-Aug-2024
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This meets the syllable count requirements which you obviously already knew. I suggest a slightly lighter shade of grey, to improve readability. If your intent is to convey that someone is headed down a dark path, you can always add some text shadowing. I can read this just fine, but some others might not.
It tempts? <= though workable, this feels slightly clunky to me. Some other two syllable alternatives:
-Evil path? Tempted?
-The evil path tempts
-some paths lead astray
-dark paths start well-lit
Thanks for the read,
🦍
Comment Written 16-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 16-Aug-2024
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Thanks for turning this poem upside down. This forces me to reconsider, although I am not convinced. The shading just appeared on my screen as a gift, but it is beyond my technical skills to play with it.
