Sandra's Lover
Viewing comments for Chapter 25 "Out but never totally out"A macabre crime thriller. Grotesque and detailed.
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Comment from Pamusart
Hi,! Eileen
The Conners are dastardly devious. Why do they want to keep tabs on their son?
I think they're the reason she disappeared. She probably wasn't high-class enough for him thought.
I thought you could have expanded upon the relationship between Mark and the girl. We don't even know her name.
Yeah, Manuel is pretty conflicted. He likes Mark, but he has to report to his parents or he'll lose everything.
It's possible that he could tell them some things and not all but if he got caught, he'd lose everything so he probably won't do that
I think what may happen is the Connors may find a girl that they want to be his girlfriend and then maybe they'll get married and give them grandchildren. Then they'll manipulate the grandchildren
I remember reading one other chapter in this book where Mark followed his mother and his mother was probably having sex with this black guy named Bo and he use that knowledge to force them to emancipate him. They did ensure he had every need or want covered. But then they hire somebody to spy on him. That's not very nice.
I don't have any problems with what they did if they have an open marriage that's their business. I guess they didn't want high society to know about it so that's why they gave Mark his emancipation.
I enjoyed reading your book chapter
Good job. Thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 14-Aug-2024
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Hi,! Eileen
The Conners are dastardly devious. Why do they want to keep tabs on their son?
I think they're the reason she disappeared. She probably wasn't high-class enough for him thought.
I thought you could have expanded upon the relationship between Mark and the girl. We don't even know her name.
Yeah, Manuel is pretty conflicted. He likes Mark, but he has to report to his parents or he'll lose everything.
It's possible that he could tell them some things and not all but if he got caught, he'd lose everything so he probably won't do that
I think what may happen is the Connors may find a girl that they want to be his girlfriend and then maybe they'll get married and give them grandchildren. Then they'll manipulate the grandchildren
I remember reading one other chapter in this book where Mark followed his mother and his mother was probably having sex with this black guy named Bo and he use that knowledge to force them to emancipate him. They did ensure he had every need or want covered. But then they hire somebody to spy on him. That's not very nice.
I don't have any problems with what they did if they have an open marriage that's their business. I guess they didn't want high society to know about it so that's why they gave Mark his emancipation.
I enjoyed reading your book chapter
Good job. Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 14-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 14-Aug-2024
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You will get her hame and more details later in the book. Dont forget the chapter of the morgue and his rape.
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Yeah. I missed the chapter about his rape. I'm glad her character will be expanded upon in the future.
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I enjoy creating and expanding characters. I seem to have multiple stories inside of stories. I am thinking my next books may expand on these characters.
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
Your writing is enjoyabe! This easily kept my interest. I was completely drawn into the Conners family and the suspenseful twists you've woven into this chapter. The characters are interesting, and I'm really intrigued by how their motives and secrets unfold. I can't wait to see what happens next!
reply by the author on 12-Aug-2024
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Your writing is enjoyabe! This easily kept my interest. I was completely drawn into the Conners family and the suspenseful twists you've woven into this chapter. The characters are interesting, and I'm really intrigued by how their motives and secrets unfold. I can't wait to see what happens next!
Comment Written 12-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 12-Aug-2024
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Thank you Michael, I have actually written up to chapter 45 and started 46. Keep tuned!