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The Final Novel

Fred's final novel

2 total reviews 
Comment from Andrea Kepple
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I'm amazed you were able to get so much story in so few words. The story was easy to follow. It was told in a logical way. I think I would have liked to have known why this story was Fred's final story. That's the one question I find myself asking, why is this Fred's final story?

 Comment Written 12-Aug-2024


reply by the author on 12-Aug-2024
    Thank you!
Comment from Bill Schott
Excellent
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This one-hundred-word story, The Final Novel, has the proper word count and brings the story out along with the end and motivation. I think the limited number of words have created an uneven transition between the writing story and the story written.

 Comment Written 11-Aug-2024


reply by the author on 11-Aug-2024
    Thank you!