Willing Hearts
Viewing comments for Chapter 30 "Chapter 16 C"Solve a crime and fall in love at the same time?
29 total reviews
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
I'm way behind, Barbara, and have started to catch up, but might still miss some. So don't worry. I will catch up again if can't read sometimes.
What a tragic story Noah told Sami, I can understand why he doesn't drink anymore. And I can understand why he does what he's doing now. Now to wait and see what the results are for Sarah. :)) Sandra xx
reply by the author on 20-Aug-2024
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I'm way behind, Barbara, and have started to catch up, but might still miss some. So don't worry. I will catch up again if can't read sometimes.
What a tragic story Noah told Sami, I can understand why he doesn't drink anymore. And I can understand why he does what he's doing now. Now to wait and see what the results are for Sarah. :)) Sandra xx
Comment Written 20-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 20-Aug-2024
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Yes, we needed a deeper look into Noah, but Sami had to be in the frame of mind to hear it and Noah needed to trust her enough to share it. Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Ric Myworld
I'm back on the road traveling for the last two weeks, but I'm still trying to jump online whenever possible, which has been as often as I'd like. Thanks for sharing another fine chapter.
reply by the author on 16-Aug-2024
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I'm back on the road traveling for the last two weeks, but I'm still trying to jump online whenever possible, which has been as often as I'd like. Thanks for sharing another fine chapter.
Comment Written 16-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 16-Aug-2024
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Please be safe. I'm honored you take time to read my posts. Thank you. HUGS!!!
Comment from Teri7
Barbara, This is a great chapter, but I am all out of sixes. You used really great dialogue and great descriptive words. I love what's going on with Noah and Sami! I can't wait until it is in book form. I will have to guy one! Have a blessed night my friend! Teri
reply by the author on 15-Aug-2024
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Barbara, This is a great chapter, but I am all out of sixes. You used really great dialogue and great descriptive words. I love what's going on with Noah and Sami! I can't wait until it is in book form. I will have to guy one! Have a blessed night my friend! Teri
Comment Written 14-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 15-Aug-2024
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Don't worry about the six. Virtual sixes are good. I appreciate your review.
Comment from Karen Cherry Threadgill
I do not look for errors when i read. In poem it is easier, fewer words. :-) This is moving right along. But, Noah was once again, was to quick to accuse Sami of wrong doing. If I were her, that would give me pause. Good writing. Karen
reply by the author on 14-Aug-2024
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I do not look for errors when i read. In poem it is easier, fewer words. :-) This is moving right along. But, Noah was once again, was to quick to accuse Sami of wrong doing. If I were her, that would give me pause. Good writing. Karen
Comment Written 14-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 14-Aug-2024
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Noah has a lot of issues and Sami understands because she works with teenage girls with similar issues. Thank you for the kind review.
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I am men shy I suppose, my experience has been wth takers only. I hope you sell them so well that they run out and have to reprint. Karen
Comment from Harry Craft
Great story! And what an interesting touch on the subject. I can tell you write quite a bit. This story is very well written and the characters are so life like. You know how to bring a scene about.
reply by the author on 14-Aug-2024
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Great story! And what an interesting touch on the subject. I can tell you write quite a bit. This story is very well written and the characters are so life like. You know how to bring a scene about.
Comment Written 14-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 14-Aug-2024
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Thank you for dropping by and leaving this supportive review.
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You are so welcome! Thank you Barbara for sharing! It was great.
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You are very welcome.
Comment from Paul McFarland
Another little bump in the road, but you took care of it before the end of the piece. It's good to see Noah and Sami getting a little closer. Hopefully, Chen will be dealt with shortly.
reply by the author on 14-Aug-2024
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Another little bump in the road, but you took care of it before the end of the piece. It's good to see Noah and Sami getting a little closer. Hopefully, Chen will be dealt with shortly.
Comment Written 14-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 14-Aug-2024
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I can promise at some point in this novel Chen will end up in jail. LOL Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Iza Deleanu
Another great post, the story is folding with unexpected twists and turns. The baby is a nice touch to tye story, keeps things real. Thank you for sharing and good luck with your writings.
reply by the author on 14-Aug-2024
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Another great post, the story is folding with unexpected twists and turns. The baby is a nice touch to tye story, keeps things real. Thank you for sharing and good luck with your writings.
Comment Written 13-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 14-Aug-2024
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from T B Botts
Hello Barbara,
this was an interesting chapter. I'm surprised that Noah would be so brazen as to reach into Sami's pocket, regardless of the reason. I understand the feelings of jealousy or betrayal that came over him, but he's an agent in a task force, and I would have expected him to have more self control. I suppose he's lucky she didn't respond in a negative manner. Well done gal.
Have a blessed evening.
Tom
reply by the author on 13-Aug-2024
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Hello Barbara,
this was an interesting chapter. I'm surprised that Noah would be so brazen as to reach into Sami's pocket, regardless of the reason. I understand the feelings of jealousy or betrayal that came over him, but he's an agent in a task force, and I would have expected him to have more self control. I suppose he's lucky she didn't respond in a negative manner. Well done gal.
Have a blessed evening.
Tom
Comment Written 13-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 13-Aug-2024
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Very little self-control when it comes to Sami. In the rest of his life, yes, but Sami pushes all of his buttons. Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from lyenochka
I like how you gave us Noah's background story and why rescuing women from human trafficking is personally important to him.
That Noah feels confident that he can share his deepest secrets with Sami shows us that they are really a couple already.
reply by the author on 13-Aug-2024
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I like how you gave us Noah's background story and why rescuing women from human trafficking is personally important to him.
That Noah feels confident that he can share his deepest secrets with Sami shows us that they are really a couple already.
Comment Written 12-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 13-Aug-2024
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Noah is comfortable around Sami. Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Ulla
What a great chapter, Barbara. The small conflicts seems creeping up, but Noah and Sami always finds a way. No wonder, he got freaked out about the pregnancy test as he couldn't possibly be the father. Onto the next chapter. Ulla xcx
reply by the author on 12-Aug-2024
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What a great chapter, Barbara. The small conflicts seems creeping up, but Noah and Sami always finds a way. No wonder, he got freaked out about the pregnancy test as he couldn't possibly be the father. Onto the next chapter. Ulla xcx
Comment Written 12-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 12-Aug-2024
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Thank you for the kind review. He was jealous of who could be. LOL
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Of course he was!