Spirited Justice
Viewing comments for Chapter 7 "Spirited Justice Chap 7"Mystery, crime and ghostly high jinks
18 total reviews
Comment from Ric Myworld
This two weeks has been a long grueling journey that hasn't allowed me time to do all the reading I would have liked. But I've tried to drop in here and there to keep up with what's going on in your story. Glad to see you already have a much deserved chartreuse plus sign without needing mine. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 16-Aug-2024
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This two weeks has been a long grueling journey that hasn't allowed me time to do all the reading I would have liked. But I've tried to drop in here and there to keep up with what's going on in your story. Glad to see you already have a much deserved chartreuse plus sign without needing mine. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 16-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 16-Aug-2024
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Are you home now or still on the road? Traveling and staying out can be a real pain. Thank you for thinking about me and using your cherished free time to read my stories, YOU are the best, my friend.
Smiles and hugs, Carol
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Still traveling. Hope to be home next week. Hugs!
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Stay safe! Hugs right back to you!
Comment from lyenochka
I like how you have Donatelli complaining about his ghost accomplices but he actually hopes they find out the information that he can't find. Cute banter among them!
Hope he gets some sleep!
reply by the author on 16-Aug-2024
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I like how you have Donatelli complaining about his ghost accomplices but he actually hopes they find out the information that he can't find. Cute banter among them!
Hope he gets some sleep!
Comment Written 14-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 16-Aug-2024
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Matthew Donatelli really has a heart of gold, but he's over worked and definitely hates to admit that a ghost (especially a woman) can show him up. He needs some sleep soon!
Smiles, Carol
Comment from prettybluebirds
I'm back today. This chapter is full of action and excitement from start to finish. I'm still trying to get into the story, and I will continue reading when I can.
reply by the author on 14-Aug-2024
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I'm back today. This chapter is full of action and excitement from start to finish. I'm still trying to get into the story, and I will continue reading when I can.
Comment Written 14-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 14-Aug-2024
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Hi, April. I am so happy to see you. Hope all is well with you. Thanks for reading another chapter and I hope you enjoy Eleanor, she's flitting around all over the place.
Smiles, Carol
Comment from Carol Clark2
Wow, there's so much excitement in this book! I like the way the ghosts gather information that others cannot obtain. And I like Eleanor's intuitive nature. Another good chapter! Hugs!
reply by the author on 14-Aug-2024
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Wow, there's so much excitement in this book! I like the way the ghosts gather information that others cannot obtain. And I like Eleanor's intuitive nature. Another good chapter! Hugs!
Comment Written 13-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 14-Aug-2024
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Yes, Eleanor seems to sense what's happening and where she needs to be. I love her good nature and how she gets the men to do what she needs done, even if they don't want to believe she's real. She makes me happy!
Smiles, Carol
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She's a fun character!
Comment from Ulla
Hi Carol, the plot is thickening and you're so good at that aren't you? Now, this is another attempted murder and Donatelli is not not believing a word he's being told. Neither am I. Can't wait to reading on. This is a great story. A big hug. Ulla xcx
reply by the author on 12-Aug-2024
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Hi Carol, the plot is thickening and you're so good at that aren't you? Now, this is another attempted murder and Donatelli is not not believing a word he's being told. Neither am I. Can't wait to reading on. This is a great story. A big hug. Ulla xcx
Comment Written 12-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 12-Aug-2024
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Wow! Ulla...you are being so nice too me. I needed a pick m,e up today and you just handed me one. thank you so much for enjoying the story. I was afraid it wasn't that good since I've lost some of my following, but it could be the summer too. Can't wait to see the results of the contest...it says 2 to 4 days. I don't even know who competed since we lost you. Don't forget that you do have to finish that story though.
Hugs and love, Carol
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Oh, I will finish the story. I promise. I think you're having a good chance of winning it. We'll see.
I just love this Eleanor. Xx
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I love her too! So that makes me happy! one of the segments that I lost was with Eleanor and now I am trying to recall enough so I can somehow work it into the next chapter or so... Smiles!
Comment from Wendy G
The "accident" may well be another attempted murder. My mind is whirling around all the hows and the whys for all these events, and what it all has to do with Carlos, Jose and Angelo. Just as well there are a couple of ghosts to offer their help.
Wendy
Edit: I'm Sorry, Detective. (I'm sorry, Detective)
reply by the author on 12-Aug-2024
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The "accident" may well be another attempted murder. My mind is whirling around all the hows and the whys for all these events, and what it all has to do with Carlos, Jose and Angelo. Just as well there are a couple of ghosts to offer their help.
Wendy
Edit: I'm Sorry, Detective. (I'm sorry, Detective)
Comment Written 12-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 12-Aug-2024
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thanks for reading and reviewing as always, Wendy. I think Eleanor and Danni will have their hands full with it, but they always seem to add a bit of spice to our lives.
Smiles, Carol
Comment from Carol Hillebrenner
Jose is certainly in an unexpected place and using a fake name. Could he had pushed the man from the catwalk? Where is Sophia? You write such an involved mystery with many people and ghosts involved. It's very enjoyable trying to solve the mystery before Donatelli.
reply by the author on 11-Aug-2024
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Jose is certainly in an unexpected place and using a fake name. Could he had pushed the man from the catwalk? Where is Sophia? You write such an involved mystery with many people and ghosts involved. It's very enjoyable trying to solve the mystery before Donatelli.
Comment Written 11-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 11-Aug-2024
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Eleanor just found Sophia and Hilda with the stranger, Johan who says he's been sent by her parents to check on her.... but Eleanor knows he's the guy she saw at the airport with Jose. I'm glad yu are enjoying the story. Thank you so much.
Smiles, Carol
Comment from karenina
Okay. I'm sold that Max is the best dog ever. Just saying maybe there is a time coming up when Garth steps in! Lots of characters but all of them have a throughline to whatever the heck is coming to the forefront! I like how spunky Danni is. On to the next chapter!
Karenina
reply by the author on 11-Aug-2024
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Okay. I'm sold that Max is the best dog ever. Just saying maybe there is a time coming up when Garth steps in! Lots of characters but all of them have a throughline to whatever the heck is coming to the forefront! I like how spunky Danni is. On to the next chapter!
Karenina
Comment Written 11-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 11-Aug-2024
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Everyone is looking for the Cowboy...I just haven't figured out how to work him into the scenario yet.... I think Eleanor will have to contact him somehow, because Donatelli isn't going to do it. Glad you like Danni...
Smiles, Carol
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Hmm. Maybe someone who has passed on needs Eleanor to contact Garth with an important message.
Once he's in the story you'll pit him to good use!
:)
Comment from LJbutterfly
Another bad guy has been introduced...Johan. I'm guessing Eleanor saw him at the airport with Jose. Was Jose the man dressed in black hiding behind the dinosaur exhibit? I'm sure I will understand all when I read the next exciting chapter.
reply by the author on 11-Aug-2024
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Another bad guy has been introduced...Johan. I'm guessing Eleanor saw him at the airport with Jose. Was Jose the man dressed in black hiding behind the dinosaur exhibit? I'm sure I will understand all when I read the next exciting chapter.
Comment Written 11-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 11-Aug-2024
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Now you know I'm not going to tell you that, Lorraine. Somethings brewing with these guys but I'm not sure which way its going. It's trouble regardless....
Smiles, Carol
Comment from royowen
They've discovered the man that they found was lying on the ground was OK, living but obviously hurt. But clever Danni, smelt a rat, when she discovered and investigates the nuts and bolts of things, well done, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 11-Aug-2024
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They've discovered the man that they found was lying on the ground was OK, living but obviously hurt. But clever Danni, smelt a rat, when she discovered and investigates the nuts and bolts of things, well done, blessings Roy
Comment Written 11-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 11-Aug-2024
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that man had a lot of fear in his eyes...wonder if he'll talk about what happened? Or was the "accident" a diversion for the attempted kidnapping of Sophia and Hilda? Interesting!
Smiles, Carol
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you know heh heh