2024 Gypsy's Tanka
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17 total reviews
Comment from RJ Heritage
This poem reminds me of two lovers who cone together after much hardship that kept them apart. The caption is beautiful and well illustrated. Thanks fir sharing
RJ
reply by the author on 10-Aug-2024
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This poem reminds me of two lovers who cone together after much hardship that kept them apart. The caption is beautiful and well illustrated. Thanks fir sharing
RJ
Comment Written 10-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 10-Aug-2024
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Thank you very much, RJ
Gypsy 😊
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My pleasure
RJ
Comment from lyenochka
Great tanka which makes me think of our country in these turbulent time. Most want to unite as one under wise and sane leaders. It's sad that some groups are spreading lies to separate us.
reply by the author on 10-Aug-2024
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Great tanka which makes me think of our country in these turbulent time. Most want to unite as one under wise and sane leaders. It's sad that some groups are spreading lies to separate us.
Comment Written 10-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 10-Aug-2024
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Yes! you are the only one who got it. Thank you, big sister.
How are you doing? I am cleaning with my son-in-law. The landlady is coming tomorrow to check our balcony. It usually has a lot of boxes but it's all clean now. Tomorrow, my daughter is getting a dog for Atticus. I cleaned the living room and kitchen making sure all the tiny legos are not on the floor. Atticus has tons of legos so I don't know how that is going to work. I like dogs and cats but I am not a pet kind of girl. But I am happy for Atticus.
It's super hot in Pasadena... all of Los Angeles. I hope you are cool.
Love,
MariVal
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
Some wonderful alliteration powering those turbulent waters to their peaceful conclusion, at least until the wind changes its mind. Beautifully atmospheric and a joy to read. Thank you, Gypsy. Have a great weekend. Debbie
reply by the author on 10-Aug-2024
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Some wonderful alliteration powering those turbulent waters to their peaceful conclusion, at least until the wind changes its mind. Beautifully atmospheric and a joy to read. Thank you, Gypsy. Have a great weekend. Debbie
Comment Written 10-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 10-Aug-2024
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Thank you very much, Debbie.
Gypsy 😊
Comment from jake cosmos aller
love this tanka about change of nature and where things are going Love the image chosen and the theme of the river of life flowing through the winds of change
reply by the author on 10-Aug-2024
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love this tanka about change of nature and where things are going Love the image chosen and the theme of the river of life flowing through the winds of change
Comment Written 10-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 10-Aug-2024
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Thank you very much, Jake.
Gypsy 😊
Comment from barbara.wilkey
Wouldn't it be wonderful if humans would act as these turbulent waters and figure out how to become like one and because peaceful and work together instead of pulling each other apart? Thank you for sharing your wisdom with us in this beautiful poem.
reply by the author on 10-Aug-2024
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Wouldn't it be wonderful if humans would act as these turbulent waters and figure out how to become like one and because peaceful and work together instead of pulling each other apart? Thank you for sharing your wisdom with us in this beautiful poem.
Comment Written 10-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 10-Aug-2024
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Thank you very much, Barbara.
Gypsy 😊
Comment from Mark Schardine
Every relationship has all kinds of conflicts, and at times we wonder if there will ever come a quiet moment. Of course, only by withstanding adversity can harmony arise, and we appreciate it all the more.
reply by the author on 10-Aug-2024
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Every relationship has all kinds of conflicts, and at times we wonder if there will ever come a quiet moment. Of course, only by withstanding adversity can harmony arise, and we appreciate it all the more.
Comment Written 10-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 10-Aug-2024
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Thank you very much, Mark. I appreciate your six stars and kind words.
Gypsy 😊
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Nice artwork and presentation, Gypsy.
-You wrote a good tanka with a good topic.
-You set the scene very well in the opening lines.
-A very good pivot line.
-Good transition in the last lines creating
a feeling of peace "amidst the winds of change."
-Very well done; thanks for sharing it.
reply by the author on 10-Aug-2024
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-Nice artwork and presentation, Gypsy.
-You wrote a good tanka with a good topic.
-You set the scene very well in the opening lines.
-A very good pivot line.
-Good transition in the last lines creating
a feeling of peace "amidst the winds of change."
-Very well done; thanks for sharing it.
Comment Written 10-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 10-Aug-2024
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Thank you very much, Pam
Gypsy 😊
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You are very welcome, Gypsy.
Comment from Cindy Decker 3
Hello, Gypsy.
Your tanka poem is symbolic, and I really like its message.
It's like people, with troubles or hatred, coming together and working out a peaceful resolution.
Your photos are beautiful and complement your profound messages.
Great poem.
Best wishes,
Cindy
reply by the author on 10-Aug-2024
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Hello, Gypsy.
Your tanka poem is symbolic, and I really like its message.
It's like people, with troubles or hatred, coming together and working out a peaceful resolution.
Your photos are beautiful and complement your profound messages.
Great poem.
Best wishes,
Cindy
Comment Written 10-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 10-Aug-2024
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Yes, you got it. Most readers didn't. Thank you very much, Cindy.
Gypsy 😊
Comment from Neonewman
Every River ends up in the sea. A constant feed. I enjoyed the tranquility of this beautiful piece, Gypsy. It flowed like the rivers in your poetry.
God bless,
Steve
reply by the author on 10-Aug-2024
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Every River ends up in the sea. A constant feed. I enjoyed the tranquility of this beautiful piece, Gypsy. It flowed like the rivers in your poetry.
God bless,
Steve
Comment Written 09-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 10-Aug-2024
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.
Gypsy
Comment from Teri7
Gypsy, This is a really great Tanka poem you have penned. You used great descriptive words and the imagery goes well with your words. Always a joy to read and review your work my friend. love and blessings, teri
reply by the author on 09-Aug-2024
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Gypsy, This is a really great Tanka poem you have penned. You used great descriptive words and the imagery goes well with your words. Always a joy to read and review your work my friend. love and blessings, teri
Comment Written 09-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 09-Aug-2024
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Thank you very much, Teri
Gypsy 😊
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Thank you very much, Teri
Gypsy 😊