Aiona's Poems
Viewing comments for Chapter 164 "Who Decided?"Because my portfolio is too messy and I have OCD.
3 total reviews
Comment from patcelaw
I enjoyed this very much and I agree with you that our select few are trying to make the decisions for us. When it comes to elections, I am very discouraged because I think that too many people only vote because they either like a candidate or they don't like a candidate some are so hell-bent on disliking a candidate they will vote for someone who is wrong. Patricia
reply by the author on 09-Aug-2024
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I enjoyed this very much and I agree with you that our select few are trying to make the decisions for us. When it comes to elections, I am very discouraged because I think that too many people only vote because they either like a candidate or they don't like a candidate some are so hell-bent on disliking a candidate they will vote for someone who is wrong. Patricia
Comment Written 09-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 09-Aug-2024
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Thanks for your review, Patricia. Any suggestions for improvement? (Is the coloring of the text too tacky?)
Comment from Bill Schott
This poem, Who Decided?, asks the question that puzzles many -- Why have a convention? The answer is that it is never official until it is proclaimed at this event. And, like in 1980, a delegate can change his/her vote and change who a state is backing.
reply by the author on 08-Aug-2024
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This poem, Who Decided?, asks the question that puzzles many -- Why have a convention? The answer is that it is never official until it is proclaimed at this event. And, like in 1980, a delegate can change his/her vote and change who a state is backing.
Comment Written 08-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 08-Aug-2024
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Thank you for your review, Bill. Any suggestions for improvement?
Comment from SimianSavant
Right on point. I have been railing about this same issue in my portfolio. I even wrote a song about a primary and now will have to wait another three years to release it, since we really didn't have one (well there was one in the Republican Party, but not much of one, and the winner never debated). A damn shame for our country all around.
Very interesting choice of picture. Its context in this piece is better felt than explained.
Regards,
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reply by the author on 08-Aug-2024
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Right on point. I have been railing about this same issue in my portfolio. I even wrote a song about a primary and now will have to wait another three years to release it, since we really didn't have one (well there was one in the Republican Party, but not much of one, and the winner never debated). A damn shame for our country all around.
Very interesting choice of picture. Its context in this piece is better felt than explained.
Regards,
🦍
Comment Written 08-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 08-Aug-2024
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Thank you for your review. Any suggestions for improvement?
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The line spacing is too tight and the font is a bit boring. Not sure if you can do this in the so-called "advanced" editor but give it a try. If you are unable to achieve the results you want there, and like the results I have with manual HTML in my portfolio, message me back and I will provide more details. 🦍
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Also if it were me, I'd use a darker purple
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Good ideas.