College Stories(Memories of Finn)Q2
Viewing comments for Chapter 22 "Sitting in a car "A collection of Delights/Moments/Stories
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Comment from Michael Ludwinder
I thought this was solid writing. The way you describe the scene - admiring the rain while sharing a simple time with your dad - paints a relatable picture. The foresight to grab the umbrella and the amusing reality of having to share it adds a touch of humor. It's a delightful snapshot of life's little moments that was a joy to read. Great job!
reply by the author on 11-Aug-2024
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I thought this was solid writing. The way you describe the scene - admiring the rain while sharing a simple time with your dad - paints a relatable picture. The foresight to grab the umbrella and the amusing reality of having to share it adds a touch of humor. It's a delightful snapshot of life's little moments that was a joy to read. Great job!
Comment Written 05-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 11-Aug-2024
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I'm glad! Thank you for this one.
Comment from jenintorre
I love this. It is my kind of writing. Laid back, tongue in cheek and so funny I laughed out loud and I haven't done that for a long time. Well done. Jen.
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I love this. It is my kind of writing. Laid back, tongue in cheek and so funny I laughed out loud and I haven't done that for a long time. Well done. Jen.
Comment Written 05-Aug-2024
