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Inside my Dreams

contest entry

2 total reviews 
Comment from Bill Schott
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This cinquain, Inside My Dreams, has the proper formatting and seems to prove that we can laugh together, cry alone, or laugh alone inside our own dreams.

 Comment Written 05-Aug-2024


reply by the author on 05-Aug-2024
    Thank you.
Comment from Dr. Nad
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Thank you for this wonderful poem buttressed on the concept of loneliness. We all go through it at different times and in different ways. Thank you for bringing awareness to those of us who have friends and family to embrace those who don't. This is an excellent submission for the contest, best of luck.

 Comment Written 05-Aug-2024


reply by the author on 05-Aug-2024
    Thank you.
reply by Dr. Nad on 06-Aug-2024
    You're most welcome my friend.