Comment from
Pamusart
Hi
This looks like a good entry for the contest. Good luck with that!!
This is the first entry I've seen for this contest and it looks like a pretty good one
You really convey the feeling of being alone after losing your lover or your wife
I don't think this is autobiographical. I think you probably wrote it for the contest. At least I hope that's true. I hope you're not suffering like this.
This is a freeverse poem with no rhyming and no set meter. But within this poem, you show the agony of being alone after having a life with somebody else.
I enjoyed reading your poem
Good job. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 04-Aug-2024
Comment from
Dolly'sPoems
You brought grief and anguish to us in this poem, heartache and sorrow with the anxiety of loss. I wish you luck with the contest, you fulfilled the brief here, love Dolly x
Comment Written 04-Aug-2024