New years
A poem I wrote for new years day3 total reviews
Comment from barbara.wilkey
So true. A new year is a fresh beginning as is a new day. I enjoyed reading this contest entry of hope. The rhyming scheme is very good and I wish you luck with the contest.
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So true. A new year is a fresh beginning as is a new day. I enjoyed reading this contest entry of hope. The rhyming scheme is very good and I wish you luck with the contest.
Comment Written 14-Sep-2024
Comment from Patty Mazzurco
Your feedback poem beautifully captures the essence of reflecting on the past year and embracing the new one. It has a comforting and hopeful tone, encouraging readers to cherish their loved ones and carry forward their dreams. The rhythm and flow are smooth, making it a lovely piece for ushering in a fresh start.
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2024
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Your feedback poem beautifully captures the essence of reflecting on the past year and embracing the new one. It has a comforting and hopeful tone, encouraging readers to cherish their loved ones and carry forward their dreams. The rhythm and flow are smooth, making it a lovely piece for ushering in a fresh start.
Comment Written 03-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2024
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Thank you so much I'm very glad you enjoyed it
Comment from Bill Schott
This octave, New Years, has the proper formatting and reminds the readers that each new day presents a new opportunity to start again and succeed. ...
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2024
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This octave, New Years, has the proper formatting and reminds the readers that each new day presents a new opportunity to start again and succeed. ...
Comment Written 03-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2024
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Thank you so much I'm very glad you enjoyed it
