Anthesis
Septolet Poem3 total reviews
Comment from tempeste
Ciao mystery poet,
by nature I'm a loner. My family are my pets.
Sometimes I do wonder how my life would have been had I found love.
I enjoyed your poem but you need to read the requirements again.
Your poem should have 14 WORDS not syllables.
You are missing 3 words.
Best of luck!
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Ciao mystery poet,
by nature I'm a loner. My family are my pets.
Sometimes I do wonder how my life would have been had I found love.
I enjoyed your poem but you need to read the requirements again.
Your poem should have 14 WORDS not syllables.
You are missing 3 words.
Best of luck!
Comment Written 02-Aug-2024
Comment from samantha0930
This a nice poem :) It's very short and succinct, and I like how the title is the word for when a flower blooms, symbolizing love blooming/growing :)
There is a problem with the contest prompt though: It says to use 14 words, not syllables, so I think it would unfortunately be disqualified for not following the rules.
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This a nice poem :) It's very short and succinct, and I like how the title is the word for when a flower blooms, symbolizing love blooming/growing :)
There is a problem with the contest prompt though: It says to use 14 words, not syllables, so I think it would unfortunately be disqualified for not following the rules.
Comment Written 01-Aug-2024
Comment from gramalot8
You have written a beautiful Septolet. I love your message in your descriptive words.
It is amazing how ones life can change when that certain someone is suddenly in our lives.
Thanks for sharing your thoughts with us.
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You have written a beautiful Septolet. I love your message in your descriptive words.
It is amazing how ones life can change when that certain someone is suddenly in our lives.
Thanks for sharing your thoughts with us.
Comment Written 01-Aug-2024