Lennox (The Fourth)
A first book chapter3 total reviews
Comment from barbara.wilkey
Thank you for sharing this contest entry with us. There's a lot of telling and not showing in this entry. I am curious where this story is going. What will mom do now. Good luck with the contest.
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Thank you for sharing this contest entry with us. There's a lot of telling and not showing in this entry. I am curious where this story is going. What will mom do now. Good luck with the contest.
Comment Written 05-Sep-2024
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
I thought you did a great job of sharing a young child dealing with complex feelings. The way you shared the child's internal dialogue was perfect in showing us the journey. And their interactions with their family is so touching.
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I thought you did a great job of sharing a young child dealing with complex feelings. The way you shared the child's internal dialogue was perfect in showing us the journey. And their interactions with their family is so touching.
Comment Written 01-Sep-2024
Comment from patcelaw
This is very well and it is a pleasure to listen to when it is very loud. I wish you the very best with all of your writing. Also, wish you a very good week and may God bless you and keep you safe. Patricia.
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This is very well and it is a pleasure to listen to when it is very loud. I wish you the very best with all of your writing. Also, wish you a very good week and may God bless you and keep you safe. Patricia.
Comment Written 28-Aug-2024
