2024 Gypsy's Haiku
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Comment from dovemarie
Gypsy, good picture of a dandelion swaying. I always like your haikus, they are simple, short and sweet. Good ending with "meadow of wishes," I always like the image. dove
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2024
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Gypsy, good picture of a dandelion swaying. I always like your haikus, they are simple, short and sweet. Good ending with "meadow of wishes," I always like the image. dove
Comment Written 01-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2024
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Thank you very much, Dove.
Gypsy hugs 😊
Comment from barbara.wilkey
I have a sign on my computer desk that says, 'When you see a field of dandelions, you can either see a field of weeds or a field of wishes. I choose to see a field of wishes.' Thank you for sharing this poem of hope. We all need hope.
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2024
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I have a sign on my computer desk that says, 'When you see a field of dandelions, you can either see a field of weeds or a field of wishes. I choose to see a field of wishes.' Thank you for sharing this poem of hope. We all need hope.
Comment Written 31-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2024
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Aw... that is a lovely quote about dandelion.
Thank you very much, Barbara
Gypsy hugs 🤗
Comment from shelley kaye
cool wishful haiku!
may i suggest a slight change to the verb?
swaying in the summer breeze -- "SWAYS i the summer breeze"?
just a thought ;-)
a great haiku with great imagery!
thank you for sharing
shelley :)
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2024
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cool wishful haiku!
may i suggest a slight change to the verb?
swaying in the summer breeze -- "SWAYS i the summer breeze"?
just a thought ;-)
a great haiku with great imagery!
thank you for sharing
shelley :)
Comment Written 31-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2024
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Thank you very much, Shelley. I appreciate your grammar help.
Gypsy hugs 🤗
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
Another goodie. Such a wonderful image captured in skilfully succinct and evocative verse form. Thank you for sharing this delightful post, Gypsy. Take care Debbie
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2024
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Another goodie. Such a wonderful image captured in skilfully succinct and evocative verse form. Thank you for sharing this delightful post, Gypsy. Take care Debbie
Comment Written 31-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2024
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Thank you very much, Debbie
Gypsy hugs 🤗
Comment from RJ Heritage
I remember as a child my brothers and me would make our wishes and then blow the dandelions into the wind.This is a very vivid illustration of a real memory for me. It is well written and presented. Thanks for sharing.
RJ
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2024
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I remember as a child my brothers and me would make our wishes and then blow the dandelions into the wind.This is a very vivid illustration of a real memory for me. It is well written and presented. Thanks for sharing.
RJ
Comment Written 31-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2024
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I still make dandelion wishes. 😊
Thank you very much, RJ
Gypsy hugs 🤗
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You're welcome
Comment from lyenochka
I remember kids blowing on those dandelion seeds. They are so magical except they cause such a headache for the diligent gardener trying to keep the yard free of weeds!
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2024
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I remember kids blowing on those dandelion seeds. They are so magical except they cause such a headache for the diligent gardener trying to keep the yard free of weeds!
Comment Written 31-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2024
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Those flying seeds get everywhere. I still believe in dandelion wishes lol it's fun to watch Atticus picking them.
Thank you very much, big sister.
Love
Marival
Comment from Patty Mazzurco
This haiku beautifully captures a serene summer moment. The imagery of a dandelion swaying in the breeze and the meadow full of wishes evokes a sense of gentle nostalgia and tranquility. The juxtaposition of the dandelion's delicate nature with the vastness of the meadow enhances the sense of peace and longing. The structure and rhythm are well-maintained, making it a vivid and evocative piece.
reply by the author on 30-Jul-2024
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This haiku beautifully captures a serene summer moment. The imagery of a dandelion swaying in the breeze and the meadow full of wishes evokes a sense of gentle nostalgia and tranquility. The juxtaposition of the dandelion's delicate nature with the vastness of the meadow enhances the sense of peace and longing. The structure and rhythm are well-maintained, making it a vivid and evocative piece.
Comment Written 30-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 30-Jul-2024
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Thank you, Patty. You always give me such wonderful and detailed reviews, I appreciate it.
Gypsy