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Comment from Neonewman
This was a mesmerizing piece you have delivered to your fans, Gypsy. I was lost in the moment, enjoying it all. Thank you for sharing.
God bless,
Steve
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2024
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This was a mesmerizing piece you have delivered to your fans, Gypsy. I was lost in the moment, enjoying it all. Thank you for sharing.
God bless,
Steve
Comment Written 29-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2024
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Thank you very much, Steve
Gypsy hugs 🙂
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My pleasure.
Comment from barbara.wilkey
I have always wanted to see the aurora borealis. I know I would be in awe of them. Your poem is bittersweet, yet with an air of hope. I like that. Once again, you outdid yourself.
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2024
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I have always wanted to see the aurora borealis. I know I would be in awe of them. Your poem is bittersweet, yet with an air of hope. I like that. Once again, you outdid yourself.
Comment Written 29-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2024
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Thank you very much, Barbara
Gypsy hugs 🙂
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
This is so clever the way your beautiful representation, both in poetry and depiction, of the aurora borealis, captures the light of nature (sparrows) and enduring life within the darkness of loss and grief. Well done and thank you for sharing, Gypsy. Take care Debbie
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2024
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This is so clever the way your beautiful representation, both in poetry and depiction, of the aurora borealis, captures the light of nature (sparrows) and enduring life within the darkness of loss and grief. Well done and thank you for sharing, Gypsy. Take care Debbie
Comment Written 29-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2024
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Thank you very much, Debbie
Gypsy hugs 🙂
Comment from shelley kaye
i've seen the aurora borealis - well, sorta... in astronomy class in college - yea, it was fake, but still cool LOL!
nice bittersweet poem sad yet with an air of hope between the lines
smooth flow and cool pics and colours
thank you for sharing
shelley :)
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2024
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i've seen the aurora borealis - well, sorta... in astronomy class in college - yea, it was fake, but still cool LOL!
nice bittersweet poem sad yet with an air of hope between the lines
smooth flow and cool pics and colours
thank you for sharing
shelley :)
Comment Written 29-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2024
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Thank you very much, Shelley
Gypsy hugs 🙂
Comment from GWHARGIS
Of course I'm going to give you a six for this. It's such a deep poem. Do you mean that the person physically died or just the love that united them died. This is such a deeply moving poem. My mind drawing conclusions this way and that. Beautifully written. Gretchen
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2024
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Of course I'm going to give you a six for this. It's such a deep poem. Do you mean that the person physically died or just the love that united them died. This is such a deeply moving poem. My mind drawing conclusions this way and that. Beautifully written. Gretchen
Comment Written 29-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2024
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Hello, Gretchen. The poem is about the night and about a lover or husband who died.
Thank you very much, Gretchen. I appreciate your exceptional six stars review and kind words.
Gypsy hugs 🙂
Comment from royowen
An excellent post Gypsy, and as always an excellent display of the strong emotions, and the way you write of them is outstanding expression of the wonderful language, well done Gypsy, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2024
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An excellent post Gypsy, and as always an excellent display of the strong emotions, and the way you write of them is outstanding expression of the wonderful language, well done Gypsy, blessings Roy
Comment Written 29-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2024
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Thank you very much, Roy
Gypsy hugs
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Welcome
Comment from lyenochka
Love can die in the dark but the feelings and yearnings remain. I liked "covered with a veil of stars." and "soul full of celestial lights." I liked how the narrator could see the sparrows guarding their nests and see that life still goes on without the faithless lover.
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2024
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Love can die in the dark but the feelings and yearnings remain. I liked "covered with a veil of stars." and "soul full of celestial lights." I liked how the narrator could see the sparrows guarding their nests and see that life still goes on without the faithless lover.
Comment Written 28-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2024
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Thank you very much, big sister. I appreciate your exceptional six stars review!
Love,
Marival ❤️
Comment from Pamusart
Hi Gypsy
I love the photos, but where is the artwork that you did? Is it in the presentation of the poem?
I know you write free verse and with a lot of passion and you write with a lot of emotions and a lot of descriptive imagery that you can almost see in your mind. I admire that about you. You're a good.Poet
Does an aurora borealis ever suddenly go black in the sky? If not, then it wouldn't be totally dark, but I think we're talking about the metaphor dark which means pitch black and then I'm getting too analytical.
This is in your signature style, which I like very much
I enjoyed reading your poem
Good job. Thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 28-Jul-2024
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Hi Gypsy
I love the photos, but where is the artwork that you did? Is it in the presentation of the poem?
I know you write free verse and with a lot of passion and you write with a lot of emotions and a lot of descriptive imagery that you can almost see in your mind. I admire that about you. You're a good.Poet
Does an aurora borealis ever suddenly go black in the sky? If not, then it wouldn't be totally dark, but I think we're talking about the metaphor dark which means pitch black and then I'm getting too analytical.
This is in your signature style, which I like very much
I enjoyed reading your poem
Good job. Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 28-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 28-Jul-2024
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I do more than adding pictures. My presentations take longer than writing the poem.
Thank you very much, Pam.
Gypsy
Comment from Mike Stevens
Another fine poem, Gypsy------and a rather forelorn one, don't know why but the image of the northern lights seems to match the mood of loss and melancholy
reply by the author on 28-Jul-2024
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Another fine poem, Gypsy------and a rather forelorn one, don't know why but the image of the northern lights seems to match the mood of loss and melancholy
Comment Written 28-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 28-Jul-2024
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Thank you very much, Mike.
Gypsy
Comment from patcelaw
This is very nicely written and I enjoyed listening to it very much. Your presentation is beautiful. May you have a wonderful week and may God bless you. Patricia.
reply by the author on 28-Jul-2024
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This is very nicely written and I enjoyed listening to it very much. Your presentation is beautiful. May you have a wonderful week and may God bless you. Patricia.
Comment Written 28-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 28-Jul-2024
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Thank you very much, Patricia.
Gypsy