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Shocked face

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Comment from barbara.wilkey
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Whether one likes Trump or not, it's sad in our society a presidential candidate is fired upon. It makes me wonder what the Secret Service was doing and exactly who's behind these attempts, and why? It also makes me wonder why anybody would be happy at an attempt on someone's life.
Thank you for sharing this contest entry with us and good luck with the contest.

 Comment Written 20-Sep-2024


reply by the author on 20-Sep-2024
    Americans seem to need guns. We don't. The assassin was in plain sight and should have been dealt with. Thanks for reading. K xx
Comment from Sanku
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But he was right in his belief that he is invincible. the bullet miraculously grazed over his ear .A grazed ear is now like a statement for him that goes brandishing arounf .the sad part is that people also wore the ear band emulating him .what a shame!

 Comment Written 31-Jul-2024


reply by the author on 01-Aug-2024
    Even worse today; had a racial slur at Kamala Harris. Her mother Jamaican and father indian. Trump will turn people away, especially coloured folks. You live on and Island, yes? Kay xx
reply by Sanku on 02-Aug-2024
    I live in India. Kamala Harris ' mother in Indian (A hindu brahmin ) coming from my city . her father is jamaican I think..
reply by the author on 03-Aug-2024
    Namastay! Yes, her father is Jamaican. Trump really put his foot in it having a go at Kamala's origins. K xx
Comment from mermaids
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True to life words about a recent event. Yes,he has a pierced ear now. Good entry and short poem for the contest. It is more difficult to create short poems.

 Comment Written 27-Jul-2024


reply by the author on 29-Jul-2024
    Hi Elaine, Yes, it's a silly amount of words, it isn't a poem, rather a statement. Thanks for reading and hope you are well? K xx
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
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No one could dispute any of this 6 word verse, Kay. Certainly mouthing off as is his wont, shots fired and the slightest of injury, probably from something less dramatic than a bullet. But he will change the truth of that to his own advantage. A shame that he thinks this is the iconic image to get him the presidency. Well done and good luck! Debbiexx

 Comment Written 27-Jul-2024


reply by the author on 29-Jul-2024
    Hi Debbie, Thanks for reading. I couldn't help the subject. Quote: I took a bullet for democracy! He said, what a lot of rot. K xx
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
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I thought you did a wonderful job of sharing the intense nature of the attempt on his life. You share with each comma break a moment in this terrible attempt. Very creative use of 8 words!

 Comment Written 26-Jul-2024


reply by the author on 29-Jul-2024
    Hey Michael, Thanks for reading. I wouldn't call it a poem. Rather a statement. Then he said he took a bullet for democracy. I think he had his ear pierced.
    K XX
Comment from lyenochka
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I heard that the ear injury wasn't due to the bullet as previously reported but due to shrapnel.
His inflammatory rhetoric has caused so much division and attacks on Asian Americans.
But I do pray that he will repent and humble himself before the Lord.
You chose quite a controversial topic for your poem for the contest.

 Comment Written 26-Jul-2024


reply by the author on 29-Jul-2024
    He won't repent, he thinks he is Jesus, as he said in court. I wonder what he would be like if he wasn't a billionaire? T for Trump and T for trouble. K xx