Love is a streetlight
An ABC poem about two lovers in a car3 total reviews
Comment from barbara.wilkey
You're very brave attempting a contest with your very first milestone post. I enjoyed reading your entry. I enjoyed the metaphor of a streetlight and love. Good luck with the contest.
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You're very brave attempting a contest with your very first milestone post. I enjoyed reading your entry. I enjoyed the metaphor of a streetlight and love. Good luck with the contest.
Comment Written 27-Jul-2024
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
Congrats on your first post! I enjoyed it! I thought your poem beautifully shared how intimate moments can be. The way you describe the rain and streetlights creates a warm atmosphere. I think my favorite though was how the simple, everyday scene of sitting in the car transforms into a profound realization about love. Your writing truly reflects the magic in the everyday. And I loved that!
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Congrats on your first post! I enjoyed it! I thought your poem beautifully shared how intimate moments can be. The way you describe the rain and streetlights creates a warm atmosphere. I think my favorite though was how the simple, everyday scene of sitting in the car transforms into a profound realization about love. Your writing truly reflects the magic in the everyday. And I loved that!
Comment Written 26-Jul-2024
Comment from Neonewman
This is a stimulating piece you have delivered. I love the line
I hope our street light never goes out. Quite clever. Welcome to Fanstory, and congrats on getting the first milestone.
God bless,
Steve
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This is a stimulating piece you have delivered. I love the line
I hope our street light never goes out. Quite clever. Welcome to Fanstory, and congrats on getting the first milestone.
God bless,
Steve
Comment Written 25-Jul-2024
