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watching the news feeling the blues
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Comment from
Patty Mazzurco
I really felt the shift from the sadness brought on by the news to the joy found in your relationship. It's so relatable how you describe the heaviness of current events and how it can weigh on us. I love how you capture the transition from that gloom to the warmth and comfort you find in your daily life, especially with the love of your life. It's a beautiful reminder of how personal connections can truly help us overcome the negativity we see around us. Maybe adding a few more personal details about those moments of joy could make the transition even more vivid and touching.
Comment Written 24-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2024
Comment from
Tom Horonzy
I read you and agree almost entirely but for... line 14 or fifteen which I think should be off not of. no ill intent intended, and good luck with your entry.
Comment Written 24-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 24-Jul-2024
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