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Dreams Unrealized

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3 total reviews 
Comment from Cindy Decker 3
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Jim,
What a sad, yet lovely poem!
You've captured the way I feel sometimes.
But I learned you never stop learning in life, you never stop loving. So there is hope for all of us.
Best wishes,
Cindy

 Comment Written 25-Jul-2024

Comment from BOO ghost
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Fragments of my dreams now gone
ghostly shadows, light withdrawn
Bits of hopes that won't see dawn. BOO has to like these words, after all, you dealing with a ghost! Yes, we have our goals and plans, but the ultimate supernatural being, may has its own plan for you! If you're religious, lovely presentation! Nice bunch of words! Bravo!

BOO!

 Comment Written 24-Jul-2024

Comment from Tom Horonzy
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I get the drift of your words herein until mosaic stopped me short. Unsure what to make of that word. Good luck, anyway. have a great day...................

 Comment Written 24-Jul-2024