Reunion in Heaven
cherished souls embraced once more.9 total reviews
Comment from Bill Schott
This minute poem, Reunion in Heaven, has the proper formatting and has become to be known as around here as "The Long Hello". Such a reunion in Glory is almost beyond imagination.
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This minute poem, Reunion in Heaven, has the proper formatting and has become to be known as around here as "The Long Hello". Such a reunion in Glory is almost beyond imagination.
Comment Written 29-Jul-2024
Comment from tempeste
Ciao mystery poet, you now have 9 votes.
I do t have a family of my and my parents have passed away : mother in 2006 and father in 2017.
I missed them and I hope to riunite with them after my passing.
The second stanza is my favourite!
Best of luck!
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Ciao mystery poet, you now have 9 votes.
I do t have a family of my and my parents have passed away : mother in 2006 and father in 2017.
I missed them and I hope to riunite with them after my passing.
The second stanza is my favourite!
Best of luck!
Comment Written 28-Jul-2024
Comment from Esther Brown
That must have been a difficult style to write and you did it well. It is wonderful to hold to the hope of a future reunion with the ones we loved here. Esther
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That must have been a difficult style to write and you did it well. It is wonderful to hold to the hope of a future reunion with the ones we loved here. Esther
Comment Written 27-Jul-2024
Comment from jaded831
Your poem is positive and gives the reader hope, especially when facing death. Thank God I'm not there yet, but eventually we all get to that dark place. Now in my late sixties I'm thinking about the inevitable.
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Your poem is positive and gives the reader hope, especially when facing death. Thank God I'm not there yet, but eventually we all get to that dark place. Now in my late sixties I'm thinking about the inevitable.
Comment Written 27-Jul-2024
Comment from Bryce 1
I dig. A reunion in heaven. How sweet it will be. Until then, I'll dream. You've created a scene where joy and laughter takes place. Thank you for the vision. Although, the picture does take up most of the room in my head.
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2024
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I dig. A reunion in heaven. How sweet it will be. Until then, I'll dream. You've created a scene where joy and laughter takes place. Thank you for the vision. Although, the picture does take up most of the room in my head.
Comment Written 25-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2024
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Thank you!!!
Comment from royowen
Oh yes, there'll be no more trouble, no more tears, and your sorrow will be turned to joy, you've done a marvellous job with this minute poem, and I think you've got a real good chance to crack it, well done, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2024
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Oh yes, there'll be no more trouble, no more tears, and your sorrow will be turned to joy, you've done a marvellous job with this minute poem, and I think you've got a real good chance to crack it, well done, blessings Roy
Comment Written 25-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2024
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Thank you!!!
Comment from Katiemae1977
This is such a beautiful poem with a lovely statement about heaven.
Your syllable count is incorrect however.
Stsnzas are supposed to be 8 4 44 . You have 8 3 3 3. Your rhymes are correct. Just the syllable count is off. I'm sure you can easily edit.
Love the subject matter by the way.
Great job
Katiemae1977 l
reply by the author on 24-Jul-2024
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This is such a beautiful poem with a lovely statement about heaven.
Your syllable count is incorrect however.
Stsnzas are supposed to be 8 4 44 . You have 8 3 3 3. Your rhymes are correct. Just the syllable count is off. I'm sure you can easily edit.
Love the subject matter by the way.
Great job
Katiemae1977 l
Comment Written 24-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 24-Jul-2024
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Thank you for pointing that out. I thought I saved the correct version and apparently I did not. Please take another look when you have time.
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I upgraded your rating.
Comment from T.D. Hoitsma
I liked this very much, for me the setting was great the image in my mind was of a joyest journey to being with all the ones you love, a heavenly experience, nice post!
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2024
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I liked this very much, for me the setting was great the image in my mind was of a joyest journey to being with all the ones you love, a heavenly experience, nice post!
Comment Written 23-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2024
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Thank you!!
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Thank you!!!!
Comment from patcelaw
For the contest and I wish you the very best in the contest that you have a wonderful week and may your day be blessed. God bless you....................... Patricia.
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2024
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For the contest and I wish you the very best in the contest that you have a wonderful week and may your day be blessed. God bless you....................... Patricia.
Comment Written 23-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2024
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Thank you!!