Darkness Comes
Poem without a word of color.2 total reviews
Comment from Pamusart
Hi
This is a very good flowery poem. What do I mean by flowery got a lot of images that are nice during the the whole poem
I liked sparkling, diamond, dust, and a few other metaphors that you created
I believe you should've entered this in the free verse, but your contest. But this is one of the strongest entries in this contest that I've seen so far.
Beautifully done wonderful imagery
I enjoyed reading your poem
Good job. Thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2024
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Hi
This is a very good flowery poem. What do I mean by flowery got a lot of images that are nice during the the whole poem
I liked sparkling, diamond, dust, and a few other metaphors that you created
I believe you should've entered this in the free verse, but your contest. But this is one of the strongest entries in this contest that I've seen so far.
Beautifully done wonderful imagery
I enjoyed reading your poem
Good job. Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 23-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2024
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Thank you for the encouraging feedback.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
You brought the sparkle in the night with your descriptive words of light dancing when touched by the moon, I enjoyed your twinkling words here, love Dolly x x x
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2024
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You brought the sparkle in the night with your descriptive words of light dancing when touched by the moon, I enjoyed your twinkling words here, love Dolly x x x
Comment Written 23-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2024
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Thanks for your sparkling review. Appreciated.
