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Rainbows in Verse

Viewing comments for Chapter 7 "River Swamp"
Various forms of poetry

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Comment from Liz O'Neill
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You're a descriptive colors add to the mood of the swamp detail. Swamps arabic ethereal and it's looks like you caught on to some of that spirit. Well done.

 Comment Written 30-Jul-2024


reply by the author on 31-Jul-2024
    Dear Liz, thank you for your comments and review. Dove
reply by Liz O'Neill on 31-Jul-2024
    Hi Dove it's nice to meet you. My name is Liz. I just finished my autobiography
    I writing a biography about my brother who's heading your TBI so it's a little difficult but it's working.
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2024
    Hi Liz, I'm not sure what you meant by "my brother who's heading your TBI" Could you clarify? Thank you Dove
reply by Liz O'Neill on 01-Aug-2024
    My voice to text gets really messed up and I meant to say my brother who has a TBI terminal brain injury. That's who I'm writing about in this particular book. What's really sad is he has regressed he was recovering when he was 40, But as he's gotten older and is 77 I think his brain has deteriorated and he is reliving his old stages of recovery such as agitation and inappropriateness .
Comment from Teri7
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Donna, this is a very well written poem you have penned for the swamped for life event in Picture this. You used great descriptive words that go well with the art work used. love and blessings, teri

 Comment Written 22-Jul-2024


reply by the author on 23-Jul-2024
    Hi Teri, thank you for your comments and review. Love and blessings to you too! Donna
Comment from jessizero
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Did you write the poem about the picture? I don't know how club challenges work. I think you did a great job, though. I especially liked your first line. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.

 Comment Written 22-Jul-2024


reply by the author on 23-Jul-2024
    Hi jessizero, yes I wrote the poem about the picture. Thanks for your comments and review. Dove
Comment from Pamusart
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Hi, dovemarie

Good luck in your club contest

That scene in your image is haunting; as are your words

I've never liked swamps. I think it's because of the mosquitoes.

Plus, I can't swim. Your poem evoked a sense of.eeriness and also (for me) one of dread. Only because I wouldn't want to go into the swamp

I was at the Saw Hill
recreation area in Florida and it was of course on a swamp because everything in Florida is on a swamp

So I went on those boats to look at alligators Luckily, I didn't fall in

I enjoyed reading your poem

Good job. Good job. Thank you for sharing

 Comment Written 22-Jul-2024


reply by the author on 23-Jul-2024
    Dear Pamusart, thank you for your comments and review. Dove