Isaac's Love
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Comment from Bill Schott
This 5-7-5, Isaac's Love, has the proper formatting and shows evidence of then settling down of emotions when two people make it their purpose to love one another.
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This 5-7-5, Isaac's Love, has the proper formatting and shows evidence of then settling down of emotions when two people make it their purpose to love one another.
Comment Written 23-Jul-2024
Comment from Teri7
This is a very well written 5-7-5 that comes from Genesis 24:1-67. You used great descriptive words and very good imagery from the imagery you used. Best wishes in the contest. Teri
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This is a very well written 5-7-5 that comes from Genesis 24:1-67. You used great descriptive words and very good imagery from the imagery you used. Best wishes in the contest. Teri
Comment Written 22-Jul-2024
Comment from patcelaw
This is very well written about Isaac and his meeting of Rebecca in the Bible and I enjoyed it very much. You have done these three lines. Pretty much the whole story of Rebecca and Isaac's love. Patricia.
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This is very well written about Isaac and his meeting of Rebecca in the Bible and I enjoyed it very much. You have done these three lines. Pretty much the whole story of Rebecca and Isaac's love. Patricia.
Comment Written 22-Jul-2024
Comment from Earthlover
He met Rebekah
To her Isaac pledged his heart
And was comforted
I like this short and sweet biblical love story in a 5-7-5 Romance
Style.
Love the image too..
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He met Rebekah
To her Isaac pledged his heart
And was comforted
I like this short and sweet biblical love story in a 5-7-5 Romance
Style.
Love the image too..
Comment Written 22-Jul-2024
Comment from T.D. Hoitsma
Excellent short and sweet. For me it captures an awakening, not so much on finding physical love but finding yourself and being comforted by one true love where you can never lose that kind of love. I enjoyed it very much
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Excellent short and sweet. For me it captures an awakening, not so much on finding physical love but finding yourself and being comforted by one true love where you can never lose that kind of love. I enjoyed it very much
Comment Written 21-Jul-2024
Comment from Pamusart
Hi
This looks like a good entry for the contest. Good luck with that!!
This could also have been entered in the love poem Contact.
But, I think that one is free and this one doesn't entry fee. I'm not sure about the contest, but not in this contest.
I think men love the woman a lot more than the woman loves the man. I say this because I've seen so many people write on here and they're writing about meeting a girl or woman and they wait years for her to return their love. And they wouldn't do that if they didn't love very deeply
I enjoyed reading your poem
Good job. Thank you for sharing.
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Hi
This looks like a good entry for the contest. Good luck with that!!
This could also have been entered in the love poem Contact.
But, I think that one is free and this one doesn't entry fee. I'm not sure about the contest, but not in this contest.
I think men love the woman a lot more than the woman loves the man. I say this because I've seen so many people write on here and they're writing about meeting a girl or woman and they wait years for her to return their love. And they wouldn't do that if they didn't love very deeply
I enjoyed reading your poem
Good job. Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 21-Jul-2024
Comment from Cindy Decker 3
Jim,
What a lovely poem!
This is a great 5-7-5 poem, based on biblical verse.
A great entry into the 5-7-5 romance poetry contest.
Best wishes,
Cindy
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Jim,
What a lovely poem!
This is a great 5-7-5 poem, based on biblical verse.
A great entry into the 5-7-5 romance poetry contest.
Best wishes,
Cindy
Comment Written 21-Jul-2024
Comment from RodG
I had forgotten this biblical love story which you recount very well in only seventeen syllables. I especially like your use of the word "comforted." I wish you well in the contest. Rod
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I had forgotten this biblical love story which you recount very well in only seventeen syllables. I especially like your use of the word "comforted." I wish you well in the contest. Rod
Comment Written 21-Jul-2024
Comment from Patty Mazzurco
This 5-7-5 effectively captures a moment of heartfelt connection and commitment. The imagery of Isaac pledging his heart to Rebekah is tender and concise, fitting well within the traditional haiku structure. The final line, "And was comforted," provides a satisfying resolution and emotional depth.
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This 5-7-5 effectively captures a moment of heartfelt connection and commitment. The imagery of Isaac pledging his heart to Rebekah is tender and concise, fitting well within the traditional haiku structure. The final line, "And was comforted," provides a satisfying resolution and emotional depth.
Comment Written 21-Jul-2024