Comment from dragonpoet

Excellent

Hi,
Those who feel love at first sight and then find the other feels the same are so lucky. This definitely fits the contest.
Good luck in the contest.
Keep writing and stay healthy.
Have a great rest of the day and week.
Joan

 Comment Written 22-Jul-2024

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reply by the author on 22-Jul-2024

thanks

reply by dragonpoet on 23-Jul-2024

You're welcome.
Joan

Comment from jessizero

Excellent

I think you are one syllable short on that second line and one syllable short on the last one. I could be wrong, but you might want to double check it. This poem was sweet. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.

 Comment Written 21-Jul-2024

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reply by the author on 22-Jul-2024

thanks a lot

Comment from Patty Mazzurco

Excellent

Your entry for the 5-7-5 Romantic Poetry Contest, Hello succinctly captures a profound moment of connection. The imagery of "sparks flew from heart-to-heart" beautifully conveys the immediate and intense bond felt upon first meeting. The brevity of the poem aligns well with the 5-7-5 format, though incorporating a touch more detail could add depth to the emotion. Overall, it's a charming and evocative piece that effectively encapsulates the magic of discovering a soulmate.

 Comment Written 21-Jul-2024

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reply by the author on 21-Jul-2024

thanks a lot