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Water at its powerful best
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Comment from
RodG
I like this Cinquain a lot as it both allows me to SEE this fast-flowing mountain stream pass through green valleys, but also to HEAR it as it ripples downwards. But can you choose a less mundane title? Rod
Comment Written 21-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 21-Jul-2024
Hi,
Thank you for stopping bye. I totally agree with you. I've developed a mental block!! Can you help me???
- Lobber
reply by RodG on 21-Jul-2024
I usually try to title my poem with a word(s) that suggests its theme. What does the poem/picture suggest to you? WHY did you write this poem?
Comment from
Bill Schott
This cinquain, Water Streaming, has the proper word count and notes that the water is safe, except when it comes downhill and picks up speed and volume.
Comment Written 21-Jul-2024
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