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Karen's Birthday

a little limerick

10 total reviews 
Comment from lyenochka
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Great job with your suite of birthday limericks for Karen. And I like how you covered all her personal situation including her move to be closer to her sisters. I'm sure this will do great in the contest!

 Comment Written 11-Aug-2024


reply by the author on 11-Aug-2024
    Thanks so much, I appreciate it!
Comment from Karen Cherry Threadgill
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Boy howdee did you write me a swell birthday card.
You haven't known me long, but you sure properly nailed me. I enjoyed your work. It was very well done. Karen

 Comment Written 30-Jul-2024


reply by the author on 30-Jul-2024
    Thanks so much, I'm glad you liked it. It was fun to do.
reply by Karen Cherry Threadgill on 30-Jul-2024
    Keep raeding me and I will keep reading you. One for one, I am slow now as I am still unpacking and organizing. But I will review you back. Karen
reply by the author on 30-Jul-2024
    Will do!
Comment from Cindy Decker 3
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Author,
Great birthday poem!
I like all the rhymes and near rhymes that you chose.
Beautiful words and photo.
Is Karen part of Fanstory? Just wondered because I don't think I ever came across any of her writing.
Best wishes,
Cindy




 Comment Written 20-Jul-2024


reply by the author on 20-Jul-2024
    Thank you so much! Yes, Karen is a FanStorian--Karen Cherry Threadgill. Check her out!
reply by Cindy Decker 3 on 20-Jul-2024
    Thank you, gansach.
    I will.
Comment from Bill Schott
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This limerick suite, Karen's Birthday, has the proper formatting and gives a great effort to sending out birthday cheer to the Karen we all have come to endure -uh - admire.

 Comment Written 20-Jul-2024


reply by the author on 20-Jul-2024
    LOL! Thanks, Bill!
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
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A fun collection of Limericks for Karen's birthday and she will love this tribute for her. Your metre is a little bumpy in places but overall I enjoyed your message, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 19-Jul-2024


reply by the author on 19-Jul-2024
    Thank you so much!
Comment from Marilyn Hamilton
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You did a great job on this entry for the Happy Birthday contest for Karen! She is going to love all this attention...she can be so needy! LOL (jk)
Good luck in the contest!

 Comment Written 18-Jul-2024


reply by the author on 18-Jul-2024
    Thanks--good luck to you, too! I just finished reading yours. I think she'll get a kick out of all these pieces.
Comment from Lindsey Russell
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This is such an awesome birthday tribute to a friend! Great job with this! Thanks for sharing this with the community. Keep on writing and best wishes.

 Comment Written 18-Jul-2024


reply by the author on 18-Jul-2024
    Thank you so very much--I appreciate your generous review.
Comment from royowen
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Im not sure who Karen is, but happy birthday to her, and may she have many more, not many write multiple limericks in many stanzas, so well done you, very clever, and kind to remember Karen, well done, blessings Roy

 Comment Written 18-Jul-2024


reply by the author on 18-Jul-2024
    Thanks so much--Karen's a fellow FanStorian who's sponsoring a contest for her upcoming birthday. A fun little project.
reply by royowen on 18-Jul-2024
    You mean Karenina?
reply by the author on 18-Jul-2024
    No, Karen Cherry Threadgill.
reply by royowen on 18-Jul-2024
    Oh I see, well done
Comment from Pamusart
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Hi, gansac

This looks like a good entry for the contest. Good luck with that!!

Your font and background color make it so difficult for me to read your poem. You aren't the only one they're a lot of people who post things that I can't read and when I told them about it, they just keep doing it. I'm not saying you would do this forever. I told them that I would not review their work. Barefoot was totally different mirrors once I enlarged yours I could read everything. So perhaps I'm being too hard on you.

Anyway. Now that I've gotten that off my chest along with my sagging boobs, let's get to your poem.

Will you please tell me who karen is? I think I saw another poem dedicated to her happy birthday here so I'm thinking she's a fan story member.

Is she 29 again? I know I've been 29 on each birthday for the last. I'm not gonna tell you many years.

Thought you were very very well done very cute very sweet. You did a great job on this I have yet to write a limerick. I know that Marilyn is very good at it. Looks like you're pretty good at it too.

I enjoyed reading your poem

Good job. Thank you for sharing.

 Comment Written 18-Jul-2024


reply by the author on 18-Jul-2024
    Thanks so much for your review. I'm sorry you are having difficulties with reading my poems. I had your comments in mind when I went with a straight, non-italicized font, but I did want the font color to match the birthday flowers. Sorry if that, too, caused problems. I do think the poem's presentation is very important in enhancing the feel and atmosphere of the poem and helps it to be attractive to readers. I also have issues with trying to read small or overly frilly fonts or those with colors that aren't contrasted enough with the background so, when I design my poems, I choose carefully and feel if I can read it with no problem, it should be okay for others. I don't like to do the same fonts or black print on white background all the time--that's boring to me. To answer your question, Karen is a fellow writer on FanStory and who's sponsoring a contest for her birthday. I love Marilyn's limericks, too. I'm glad you liked mine. Thanks again!
Comment from patcelaw
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His birthday we sure Karen is very well written and I enjoyed listening to it very much it very well and well when it is written aloud. May you have a blessed weekend. Patricia.

 Comment Written 18-Jul-2024


reply by the author on 18-Jul-2024
    Thank you so much!