The Clock
Six- word poem9 total reviews
Comment from LJbutterfly
You can't create much of a meaningful poem in just six words; However you managed a rhyming statement. Well done. The clock in you poem must be contemporary. Modern clocks are silent.
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2024
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You can't create much of a meaningful poem in just six words; However you managed a rhyming statement. Well done. The clock in you poem must be contemporary. Modern clocks are silent.
Comment Written 24-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2024
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Thank you!
Comment from Colorado Owl
This is very clever and an excellent use of a minimum words. These writing prompts are giving me a entirely new perspective of what a poem can be, and your example is excellent. Thank you.
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2024
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This is very clever and an excellent use of a minimum words. These writing prompts are giving me a entirely new perspective of what a poem can be, and your example is excellent. Thank you.
Comment Written 24-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2024
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Thank you!
Comment from royowen
No that's true, our main clock in our living area doesn't go tick tick, nor the clock in our bedroom heh heh, in fact none of the available time pieces have a tick, or a tick, great post, great thought, good luck, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 21-Jul-2024
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No that's true, our main clock in our living area doesn't go tick tick, nor the clock in our bedroom heh heh, in fact none of the available time pieces have a tick, or a tick, great post, great thought, good luck, blessings Roy
Comment Written 20-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 21-Jul-2024
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Thank you!
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Most welcome
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
When the clock stops you had better start worrying as your time is up, I enjoyed your few words here as they made me smile, there is never enough time left. Love Dolly x x x x x x x
reply by the author on 21-Jul-2024
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When the clock stops you had better start worrying as your time is up, I enjoyed your few words here as they made me smile, there is never enough time left. Love Dolly x x x x x x x
Comment Written 20-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 21-Jul-2024
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Thank you!
Comment from bonespur
Its hard to imagine that this is a poem isn't it..not your writing but that 6 syllables are a poem. Nice choice of topic. Good job and good luck. Have a blessed day
reply by the author on 18-Jul-2024
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Its hard to imagine that this is a poem isn't it..not your writing but that 6 syllables are a poem. Nice choice of topic. Good job and good luck. Have a blessed day
Comment Written 18-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 18-Jul-2024
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Thank you!
Comment from Nicki.B
I really like this. The words and imagery. It reminds me of my childhood I had a toy clock similar for learning the time. Short and sweet but brought me so many memories, thanks for that. Best wishes.
reply by the author on 18-Jul-2024
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I really like this. The words and imagery. It reminds me of my childhood I had a toy clock similar for learning the time. Short and sweet but brought me so many memories, thanks for that. Best wishes.
Comment Written 18-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 18-Jul-2024
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Thank you!
Comment from Neonewman
Lol! A lot is said in such few words. This has my imagination going wild. Work like this can be pretty inspiring to one's muse. Thank you for sharing.
God bless,
Steve
reply by the author on 18-Jul-2024
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Lol! A lot is said in such few words. This has my imagination going wild. Work like this can be pretty inspiring to one's muse. Thank you for sharing.
God bless,
Steve
Comment Written 18-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 18-Jul-2024
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Thank you!
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My pleasure, Gunner.
Comment from jessizero
I think "did'nt" should be "didn't" unless you did that on purpose. If you did, I completely missed the point. I'm guessing you counted "tic-toc" as two words. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
reply by the author on 18-Jul-2024
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I think "did'nt" should be "didn't" unless you did that on purpose. If you did, I completely missed the point. I'm guessing you counted "tic-toc" as two words. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
Comment Written 18-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 18-Jul-2024
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Thank you for catching that type O
Comment from Pamusart
Hi, Gunner Lil
This looks like a good entry for the contest. Good luck with that!!
What a stupid clock. It can't even go tic-toc. I guess tic-toc Is a term that's used to describe a clock whether you can hear tic or a toc or not
Now, most clocks are so silent. Do we still use the words tic-tic when there is no sound?
It's kind of like that age old question about a tree falling in the forest and if nobody's there, is there any sound. After all, nobody was in the forest so nobody heard that sound
I enjoyed reading your poem
Good job. Thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 18-Jul-2024
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Hi, Gunner Lil
This looks like a good entry for the contest. Good luck with that!!
What a stupid clock. It can't even go tic-toc. I guess tic-toc Is a term that's used to describe a clock whether you can hear tic or a toc or not
Now, most clocks are so silent. Do we still use the words tic-tic when there is no sound?
It's kind of like that age old question about a tree falling in the forest and if nobody's there, is there any sound. After all, nobody was in the forest so nobody heard that sound
I enjoyed reading your poem
Good job. Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 18-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 18-Jul-2024
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Thank you!