Comment from dragonpoet

Excellent

Hi
It is sad to think of angels crying. But if Jesus could weep so can angels.
One of my babysitters, when I was young, described rain as angels crying and thunder as angels bowling in heaven.
Keep writing and stay healthy
Good luck in the contest
Enjoy the rest of your weekend
Joan

 Comment Written 20-Jul-2024

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reply by the author on 21-Jul-2024

Thanks. I used to tell my kids the same thing about the angels, but I told them thunder was God rearranging his furniture - lol.

reply by dragonpoet on 21-Jul-2024

You're welcome, Monica. Another good way to explain the noise to allay children's fears.
Joan

Comment from F. William Lester

Excellent

Well done. Your words are comforting and hopeful but are woefully in short supply these days. Good luck in the contest and have a wonderful day. Stay well.

 Comment Written 19-Jul-2024

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reply by the author on 21-Jul-2024

Thank you so much. I am glad that you liked my poem.

reply by F. William Lester on 24-Jul-2024

You're very welcome.

Comment from jessizero

Excellent

You got the syllable count right for this writing prompt, and I enjoyed your rhymes. Your message was lovely, as well. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.

 Comment Written 18-Jul-2024

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reply by the author on 21-Jul-2024

Thank you. I appreciate your reviewing.

Comment from iDri.Luv.Jesus

Excellent

Super wow, congrats to your well deep thought of 5-7-5 poem writing! I love how your opening started, and a long with the title too; especially, the rhyming is beautifully executed, and it's a clear format too. I love your artwork, and hope to see this piece a winner!

 Comment Written 18-Jul-2024

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reply by the author on 18-Jul-2024

Thank you so much! I appreciate your kind words and your well wishes.