Mother Nature Knows Best
No need to complain about the rain, little one.3 total reviews
Comment from barbara.wilkey
Yes, Mother Nature does know best and knows we need those rainy days. Thank you for sharing this contest entry with us. I enjoyed reading and want to wish you luck with the contest.
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Yes, Mother Nature does know best and knows we need those rainy days. Thank you for sharing this contest entry with us. I enjoyed reading and want to wish you luck with the contest.
Comment Written 27-Jul-2024
Comment from Bryce 1
I like what the poem says but it seems to me that it does not have too much rhythm. It's all subjective but that's just me. I do enjoy the sentiment though
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I like what the poem says but it seems to me that it does not have too much rhythm. It's all subjective but that's just me. I do enjoy the sentiment though
Comment Written 10-Jul-2024
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
Your poem beautifully captures how rain - initially unwelcome but can bring us beauty and joy. I love how you wrote this. Starting with the dialogue from an upbeat song and ending on such a positive note. Well done!
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Your poem beautifully captures how rain - initially unwelcome but can bring us beauty and joy. I love how you wrote this. Starting with the dialogue from an upbeat song and ending on such a positive note. Well done!
Comment Written 10-Jul-2024