Peaceful haven
Creation of God6 total reviews
Comment from Teri7
This is a very beautiful and very well written 5-7-5 poem you have penned for the writing contest. You used very lovely imagery and great descriptive words. Best wishes in the contest. Teri
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2024
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This is a very beautiful and very well written 5-7-5 poem you have penned for the writing contest. You used very lovely imagery and great descriptive words. Best wishes in the contest. Teri
Comment Written 09-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2024
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Thank you Teri 🙂
Comment from Pamusart
Hi,
This looks like a good entry for the contest. Good luck with that!!
Of course, a dazzling sunset would be calm and serene. Even calmer and more serene would be if you were at the oceans edge while that sunset was occurring.
I enjoyed reading your poem
Good job. Thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 08-Jul-2024
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Hi,
This looks like a good entry for the contest. Good luck with that!!
Of course, a dazzling sunset would be calm and serene. Even calmer and more serene would be if you were at the oceans edge while that sunset was occurring.
I enjoyed reading your poem
Good job. Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 08-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 08-Jul-2024
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Thank you very much
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
Your haiku beautifully captures the beauty of a sunset. There is a sense of of peace and such beauty reading this. I could see this breathtaking display. Well written!
reply by the author on 08-Jul-2024
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Your haiku beautifully captures the beauty of a sunset. There is a sense of of peace and such beauty reading this. I could see this breathtaking display. Well written!
Comment Written 08-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 08-Jul-2024
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Thank you so much 🙂
Comment from Bill Schott
This 5-7-5, Peaceful Haven, has the proper formatting and catches the end-of-day scene off into the ocean where the dwindling day recedes into the horizon, with a foreground of peace in the village. Nice.
reply by the author on 08-Jul-2024
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This 5-7-5, Peaceful Haven, has the proper formatting and catches the end-of-day scene off into the ocean where the dwindling day recedes into the horizon, with a foreground of peace in the village. Nice.
Comment Written 08-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 08-Jul-2024
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Thank you so much 🙂
Comment from royowen
An excellent 5/7/5, yes early morning sunrises can be very calm and peaceful. I'm a Morning peace, they are frequently like that, beautifully written dear friend, good luck, you've written a good post, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 08-Jul-2024
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An excellent 5/7/5, yes early morning sunrises can be very calm and peaceful. I'm a Morning peace, they are frequently like that, beautifully written dear friend, good luck, you've written a good post, blessings Roy
Comment Written 08-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 08-Jul-2024
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Thanks Roy 🙂
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Welcome
Comment from Dr. Nad
You have taken a beautiful picture and illustrated its effectiveness through three short lines that protest to the God of all comfort who is the creator. It is so easy to see problems, difficulties, and challenges as we go through life but you have reminded us that every hill has its Valley and we can rise above pain in order to settle down in prosperity.
reply by the author on 07-Jul-2024
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You have taken a beautiful picture and illustrated its effectiveness through three short lines that protest to the God of all comfort who is the creator. It is so easy to see problems, difficulties, and challenges as we go through life but you have reminded us that every hill has its Valley and we can rise above pain in order to settle down in prosperity.
Comment Written 07-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 07-Jul-2024
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Thank you so much
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You are most welcome my friend.