2024 Gypsy's Haiku
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9 total reviews
Comment from Mark Schardine
Somehow painful childhood memories cause difficulties, even trauma, and years or decades later. Maybe it must take the form of repentance, and recognition of what we did wrong. On the other hand, it can require pondering wrongs done to us, and finding the strength to overcome them.
reply by the author on 11-Jul-2024
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Somehow painful childhood memories cause difficulties, even trauma, and years or decades later. Maybe it must take the form of repentance, and recognition of what we did wrong. On the other hand, it can require pondering wrongs done to us, and finding the strength to overcome them.
Comment Written 11-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 11-Jul-2024
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Thank you very much. I appreciate it.
Gypsy
Comment from shelley kaye
love that pic! seems so magical yet calming. . .
a great family senryu - it's why i'm in therapy LOL!!
love the tall grass - makes the reading wonder what's hiding in it
great work! thank you for sharing
shelley :)
reply by the author on 07-Jul-2024
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love that pic! seems so magical yet calming. . .
a great family senryu - it's why i'm in therapy LOL!!
love the tall grass - makes the reading wonder what's hiding in it
great work! thank you for sharing
shelley :)
Comment Written 07-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 07-Jul-2024
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Thank you very much, Shelley. Most of us are in therapy due to family crisis lol
Gypsy
Comment from Neonewman
This is an exceptional piece you have delivered for this Senryu for the Haiku Club, Gypsy. Great artwork that accompanies it as well. Thank you for sharing.
God bless,
Steve
reply by the author on 07-Jul-2024
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This is an exceptional piece you have delivered for this Senryu for the Haiku Club, Gypsy. Great artwork that accompanies it as well. Thank you for sharing.
God bless,
Steve
Comment Written 07-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 07-Jul-2024
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Thank you very much, Steve. I appreciate your exceptional six stars review and kind words.
Gypsy
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Well deserved. We are at the beginning stages of Tropical storm Beryle. Depending on the damages he brings, I may not be able to be on for a few days.
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We have hot weather in Los Angeles
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Gypsy, we were just hit hard by Hurricane Beryl, we got power, water and internet back this morning.
Comment from lyenochka
It's a beautiful thing if through our dreams we can undo those "childhood wrongs" and be healed. We can also write and release some of the ill will and forgive. Great message!
reply by the author on 07-Jul-2024
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It's a beautiful thing if through our dreams we can undo those "childhood wrongs" and be healed. We can also write and release some of the ill will and forgive. Great message!
Comment Written 06-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 07-Jul-2024
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Thankyouverymuch, big sister.
Love
Marival ❤️
Comment from RJ Heritage
Your words seem deep rooted on truth, and therefore very sincere. Your presentation is well made with imagery that compliment the written verse.
Thanks for sharing.
RJ
reply by the author on 06-Jul-2024
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Your words seem deep rooted on truth, and therefore very sincere. Your presentation is well made with imagery that compliment the written verse.
Thanks for sharing.
RJ
Comment Written 06-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 06-Jul-2024
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Thank you very much, RJ 😊
Gypsy
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You're welcome.
Have,a good night.
RJ
Comment from Rachelle Allen
This one poked like a dagger, and I bet I am not even close to the only one who read it who feels the same way. That was a point-blank hit right to the bulls-eye. And, of course, the artwork just takes it over the top. Seriously, you are such an ARTIST, Gypsy!! I feel about you the way I used to feel when I took piano lessons, and my teacher would play something. "Will I EVER be that polished and impressive?" I used to wonder. You enchant me with your talent.
reply by the author on 06-Jul-2024
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This one poked like a dagger, and I bet I am not even close to the only one who read it who feels the same way. That was a point-blank hit right to the bulls-eye. And, of course, the artwork just takes it over the top. Seriously, you are such an ARTIST, Gypsy!! I feel about you the way I used to feel when I took piano lessons, and my teacher would play something. "Will I EVER be that polished and impressive?" I used to wonder. You enchant me with your talent.
Comment Written 06-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 06-Jul-2024
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Rachelle, your kind words touch my heart, thank you very much!
Gypsy hugs 😊
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It is so my pleasure, Sweet and Talented Gypsy. xoxo
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
This is so poignant, Gypsy, and so evocatively complemented with your dream-like visual. To return and undo childhood wrongs is tempting but, at the same time, you are the person you are as a result and that would mean tearing away a part of you.... Debbie
reply by the author on 06-Jul-2024
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This is so poignant, Gypsy, and so evocatively complemented with your dream-like visual. To return and undo childhood wrongs is tempting but, at the same time, you are the person you are as a result and that would mean tearing away a part of you.... Debbie
Comment Written 06-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 06-Jul-2024
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Thank you very much, Debbie, I agree with you. There's a reason why we can't undo the past.
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Comment from royowen
I think those of us who fall under the spell of pondering life and all its complicated compartments, searching for the meaning tend to do what your doing, but life is centred in Christ, and you're discovering that, well done, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 06-Jul-2024
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I think those of us who fall under the spell of pondering life and all its complicated compartments, searching for the meaning tend to do what your doing, but life is centred in Christ, and you're discovering that, well done, blessings Roy
Comment Written 06-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 06-Jul-2024
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Roy
Thank you very much for your exceptional six stars review and kind words.
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Most welcome
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Most welcome
Comment from patcelaw
This is very beautifully written, and I enjoyed listening to it very much. I think all of us have had times in our childhood where we were done wrong. The secret to knowing what to do with those wrongs and later life is important for us all. Your work is lovely thank you so much for Sherrie. Patricia.
reply by the author on 06-Jul-2024
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This is very beautifully written, and I enjoyed listening to it very much. I think all of us have had times in our childhood where we were done wrong. The secret to knowing what to do with those wrongs and later life is important for us all. Your work is lovely thank you so much for Sherrie. Patricia.
Comment Written 06-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 06-Jul-2024
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Thank you very much, Patricia
Gypsy