Comment from dragonpoet

Excellent

HI Jake,
This is a well done and truthful rictameter. I whole-heartedly agree with you about the NRA and its lie. I think they should be listed as accessory to murder in all these mass killings. Maybe that will lead them to allow sane gun control laws.
Keep writing and stay healthy
Good luck in the contest.
Have a great day.
Joan

 Comment Written 12-Jul-2024

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reply by the author on 15-Jul-2024

thanks as always

reply by dragonpoet on 15-Jul-2024

No problem, Jake.
Joan

Comment from Bill Schott

Excellent

This rictameter, Gun Ghosts, has the proper formatting and makes the point that the more guns are used in killing the more some want to do more to allow it.

 Comment Written 06-Jul-2024

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reply by the author on 07-Jul-2024

thanks a lot

Comment from Pamusart

Excellent

Hi

This looks like a good entry for the contest. Good luck with that!!

I'd say you could've even said ghost guns. Because they create ghosts, but Gun ghosts also says it all

Yes, the Republican party is totally controlled by the NRA

I wonder if some Democrats are also complicit. It seems like it's politically correct on one end of the spectrum to want more guns and the other side it's politically correct to speak out on gun violence and to try to pass laws banning assault rifles. But, this is the side that keeps getting struck down in court. So maybe the NRA also has the supreme court and lower courts in its pocket.

I enjoyed reading your poem

Good job. Thank you for sharing.

 Comment Written 05-Jul-2024

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reply by the author on 06-Jul-2024

thanks there is a lot of blame to go around