Comment from Earl Corp

Excellent

I don't think I have ever reviewed a rictameter before. You raise some interesting points with your poem. Thank you for sharing. Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 06-Jul-2024

Comment from Pamusart

Excellent

Hi

This looks like a good entry for the contest. Good luck with that!!

I don't grieve for God because I believe that all this wickedness does not bother Him He'd rather concentrate on those who are good. There's not much He can do about somebody who continues to wallow in wickedness.

I believe that He will offer them redemption. They can atone for their sins by accepting that redemption and changing their ways. It doesn't do any good to accept the redemption once and then go back to your wicked ways Pretty soon it won't be offered to you at all

All of those things you mention, unfortunately, are happening all the time everywhere every day

One wonders sometimes why all this suffering occurs. It's usually the innocents that are caught up and killed in these type of events.

Does God want the souls of those innocents to give them everlasting life? That is what I think

I Enjoyed reading your poem

Good job. Thank you for sharing.

 Comment Written 06-Jul-2024